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Sea Breeze
Contributed by
Dissolvedlines
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Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 03:00:54 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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Litmus paper slides down my mind
And the colour reads acidic
I eat some sweet mango flesh
And now it reads neutral
Neutral like the colours and tones
Of a salty sea breeze that whispers on my face
That clever caress and mind bless
And in my heart it comes to rest
Sounds of the sea and waves
Now climb into my everyday
I am not near the sea
But can feel its gentle breeze
A calming cool breeze
From the deep blue Sea.
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Re: Sea Breeze
(User Rating: 1 ) by exiled on
Wednesday, 5th November 2008 @ 03:11:20 PM AEST (User
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nice play on words. i liked it. |
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Re: Sea Breeze
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 09:41:32 PM AEST (User
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Love your use of metaphors...NIce imagery here..
Welcome to YPDC....
Jenni |
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