Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 13:29:16 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 146112 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2008-11-04 14:14:43 [hometext] => Feelings [bodytext] => I want to know what happened
I want to know what I did
I'm still hurting
I'm still crying
I want to know why you left
I want to know why you didn't see the hurt in my eyes
You told me it was over, that we should just be friends
I put on a face and said ok
You stood there for a few moments just looking at me
I didn't acknowledge what you said or that you were still there
You said you had to leave and ok was all I said
You had the guts to hug me after all you said
You left me standing there and I just cried
I've cried for so long and now its been too long
You made me cry
Then I find out you just ran your mouth
Ran your mouth to your friends...
Your friends had me crying, yet you didn't know why
Well, I'm done...I'm done, its been too long..
Too long have I waited
Too long have I cried
You weren't worth it
You weren't worth the tears
If you came back to tell me your sorry
I wouldn't listen, remember you broke my heart
I wouldn't listen but yet I'd let you talk
Then it would be my turn
I'd have just one thing to say
"If you wanted me so bad....
Why did you walk away?"
That's all I'd say and then just like you
I'd just walk away. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 48 [informant] => tinkbaby101 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Untitled

Contributed by tinkbaby101 on Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 02:14:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I want to know what happened
I want to know what I did
I'm still hurting
I'm still crying
I want to know why you left
I want to know why you didn't see the hurt in my eyes
You told me it was over, that we should just be friends
I put on a face and said ok
You stood there for a few moments just looking at me
I didn't acknowledge what you said or that you were still there
You said you had to leave and ok was all I said
You had the guts to hug me after all you said
You left me standing there and I just cried
I've cried for so long and now its been too long
You made me cry
Then I find out you just ran your mouth
Ran your mouth to your friends...
Your friends had me crying, yet you didn't know why
Well, I'm done...I'm done, its been too long..
Too long have I waited
Too long have I cried
You weren't worth it
You weren't worth the tears
If you came back to tell me your sorry
I wouldn't listen, remember you broke my heart
I wouldn't listen but yet I'd let you talk
Then it would be my turn
I'd have just one thing to say
"If you wanted me so bad....
Why did you walk away?"
That's all I'd say and then just like you
I'd just walk away.




Copyright © tinkbaby101 ... [ 2008-11-04 14:14:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 02:17:41 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
this is a very strong write it takes a lot to put out raw emotions poetry should be pure and raw and thats what this is good write


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 04:05:08 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
You know I love you... Take care of yourself and keep writing. I know you have more wonderful words in you. Go Tink!
~Butterfly~


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by 143 on Tuesday, 4th November 2008 @ 07:56:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Tink, I've personally been in your shoes!
I felt every single line that you written here.
That was deep and very hard to write I bet?

You inspire me ...
GREAT JOB!!!

143


stop by sometime...




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com