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our conversation sometimes gives me thought for a lot of my poems so I say thanks

My problem is that I don't know what I want
It just never comes in daily thought
Dreams of travel and exploration
I want to travel before my expiration
but I have things to do first
I don't know what to do
I just don't ever think it through
I have other things that are more important
but my problem is I don't know what I want
It just never comes to me in daily thought

what to do
if I where you
what would my dream be
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My problem is that I don't know what I want

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 06:04:48 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I owe this to karoody. It just came to me in the middle of our conversation
our conversation sometimes gives me thought for a lot of my poems so I say thanks

My problem is that I don't know what I want
It just never comes in daily thought
Dreams of travel and exploration
I want to travel before my expiration
but I have things to do first
I don't know what to do
I just don't ever think it through
I have other things that are more important
but my problem is I don't know what I want
It just never comes to me in daily thought

what to do
if I where you
what would my dream be
If you could be me

Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2008-11-03 18:04:48]
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Re: My problem is that I don't know what I want (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 06:31:28 PM AEST
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Kelly~
This made me smile
there is always time to dream big and search the soul
You will figure out what it is one day...
I'll tell you though,
I'm not so sure as I sit here that anything is more important than the dreams...
Perhaps loving people and being loved in turn
Love Smiles and huge hugs always...
Kara

Re: My problem is that I don't know what I want (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 06:38:54 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. I can relate because i too don't know what i want out of life. Great Job!

Re: My problem is that I don't know what I want (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 09:01:00 PM AEST
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I like this more for the reason that it is so real and understandable.
I totally get what you are saying. Great Job!
-Butterfly

Re: My problem is that I don't know what I want (User Rating: 1 )
by katiejon on Thursday, 28th February 2013 @ 03:00:57 PM AEST
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Good

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