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Even the Sun's ray...
But now I can LOUDLY say:
The HOPE will remain till the last day!
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The Upward Spiral

Contributed by 01001100 on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 07:34:04 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Back then everything was cold and gray,
Even the Sun's ray...
But now I can LOUDLY say:
The HOPE will remain till the last day!

Copyright © 01001100 ... [ 2008-11-03 07:34:04]
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Re: The Upward Spiral (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 04:32:18 PM AEST
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And what is the HOPE to which you refer?
My hope is referred to as "That Blessed Hope"
born out of Faith in a greater power than myself.
Even so, we all get depressed and even like to
express ourselves in Dark Poetry. I've written
many just like this one. But my advice to all
who get into a funk is this:

Whatever things are true, whatever things are honest,
whatever things are just, whatever things are pure,
whatever things are lovely, whatever things are of good
report; if there be any virtue,and if there be any praise,
think on these things. Phillipians 4:8. Now, walk back out
again into the sunshine and the light! (:>
Blessings,
Robert Edgar "Lawdog" Burns

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