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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Broken Porcelain
[time] => 2008-11-02 12:42:39
[hometext] => Hoping this is a good-bye to the chains. I'm still caged. but I don't have to be chained. This is about two people, just hard to write it that way, and keep the flow...
[bodytext] => I ask you about the coming storm
You excuse it away as nothing
Dirt swept under the rug
I let go of a sigh
The phone rings
You turn your soul around
To make sure the cracks aren't showing
It's so sad the lies we tell
To get through a day
I wonder if you even know who you are
It's been so long since I saw you
Yet you're right in front of me
I love you, to the point of agony
But I have to love me to
And I can't save you
I must walk away
You're not going to understand
You'll resent me
Hopefully one day forgive
Maybe one day we can close this book
And laugh at these cracks
Instead of hide them
[comments] => 12
[counter] => 310
[topic] => 75
[informant] => karoody
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 0
[associated] =>
[topicname] => anguished
)
Broken Porcelain
Contributed by
karoody
on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:42:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I ask you about the coming storm
You excuse it away as nothing
Dirt swept under the rug
I let go of a sigh
The phone rings
You turn your soul around
To make sure the cracks aren't showing
It's so sad the lies we tell
To get through a day
I wonder if you even know who you are
It's been so long since I saw you
Yet you're right in front of me
I love you, to the point of agony
But I have to love me to
And I can't save you
I must walk away
You're not going to understand
You'll resent me
Hopefully one day forgive
Maybe one day we can close this book
And laugh at these cracks
Instead of hide them
Copyright ©
karoody
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2008-11-02 12:42:39]
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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by Crow on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 01:15:04 PM AEST
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| hon, what a sad painful write. how brutal people can be on our hearts and never even know it..I have to step away and collect Myself when I read these writes.. Lane |
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 02:41:46 PM AEST
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Yeah .. I'm with crow... I have to walk away for a moment also.
I dont know what to say... for the first time I'm speachless, usually I can collect myself and respond, but this has silenced me.
~Bin~ |
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 09:13:16 PM AEST
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Awww Hun, this is heartbreaking.... but I love the positive ending.... it truly shows who you are!!
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 10:34:54 PM AEST
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Love the tittle, and the way
it draws one in, it speaks
softly but with purpose and
inquisitivness, a lovely write
my friend . . .
Ben
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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by shelby on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 11:14:48 PM AEST
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Nobody can confine us in chains if we do not let them.
There are many kinds of chains this I know......
Touching write.
hugs
Shall |
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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by shelby on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 11:16:49 PM AEST
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Nobody can confine us in chains if we do not let them.
There are many kinds of chains this I know......
Touching write.
hugs
Shall |
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 07:55:22 AM AEST
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*sigh*
Don't ya hate it when people try to invalidate your feelings?
This one floors me. These are the kinds of writes by you that I spoke of the other day. You write with such conviction and power it is amazing. It's also kinda scary in a way. *shudders* cause I'd hate to be on the receiving end. However, you are so full of understanding and compassion you can end it on a positive note: Hopefully one day forgive
Maybe one day we can close this book
And laugh at these cracks
Instead of hide them Yeah, that's what I'm talking about.
*incredibly huge hug*
Love,
Tim
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 10:23:04 AM AEST
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True love is unconditional, without reservation, and
without any strings or performance quotas attached.
Like a parent loves a child, even when they misbehave.
Always standing behind them, even if it takes you to
hell and back. This kind of love, can no man chain!
It's porcelain is bonded over IRON!
Blessings,
Lawdog |
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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by callme_spart on
Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 03:25:49 AM AEST
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| so sad. what a beautifully tragic dilemma. i hope you were able to break the chains and pain |
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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by lnnie on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 01:16:22 AM AEST
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"You turn your soul around
To make sure the cracks aren't showing"
Never more beautiful lines ever written.
Great stuff
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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by Deadson on
Saturday, 2nd April 2011 @ 09:02:36 PM AEST
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| =) |
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Re: Broken Porcelain
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