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Array ( [sid] => 146067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Its alwaws rainin above me [time] => 2008-11-02 09:51:54 [hometext] => This is gonna be my last post for a while...ill be back when i have something to say...when i feel inspired again [bodytext] => There is a big black cloud looming over my head
I lay down to sleep and it creeps over my bed
So I step outside to clear my brain
And wouldnt ya know it started to rain
Its been this way all through my present and past
But someone once told me that stormy weather never lasts

Well i hope that its true what someone once said
Cause it seems it'll be rainin till im found somewhere dead
Troubled by the pain soaked by the rain turned to bones and ash
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Its alwaws rainin above me

Contributed by outlawpoet on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 09:51:54 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

There is a big black cloud looming over my head
I lay down to sleep and it creeps over my bed
So I step outside to clear my brain
And wouldnt ya know it started to rain
Its been this way all through my present and past
But someone once told me that stormy weather never lasts

Well i hope that its true what someone once said
Cause it seems it'll be rainin till im found somewhere dead
Troubled by the pain soaked by the rain turned to bones and ash
But someone once told me that stormy weather never lasts

Copyright © outlawpoet ... [ 2008-11-02 09:51:54]
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Re: Its alwaws rainin above me (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 10:36:41 AM AEST
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ur going to be deeply missed Cowboy.
~Bin~

Re: Its alwaws rainin above me (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:15:59 PM AEST
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Rain isn't always bad, it can be cleansing. But you will be missed. I agree. I really do.
Take care, okay?
Hugs
kara

Re: Its alwaws rainin above me (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:22:02 PM AEST
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What can I say to this. Its very good and well written.
I can't wait for you to be inspired again.
-Butterfly

Re: Its alwaws rainin above me (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 05:11:54 PM AEST
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Great write and I liked the way it flowed
but went there's dark and stormy weather in your head
that just means something dark should be said
my point being write how you feel I don't find inspiration I just write from the top of my head most of the time
but hope you write again soon I enjoy reading what you write

Re: Its alwaws rainin above me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 01:25:31 AM AEST
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Oh hey now you just came back, whats up with this not being in spired ????????

I liked the poem and hey talk to raindancermyst, rain is good, dance in a puddle or slip in the mud and fall on ur arssssss that will give ya some in spir ation ROFLMAO

hope you are not gone to long

Hugs
Michelle

Re: Its alwaws rainin above me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 03:53:35 AM AEST
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I can really relate to this. This is great writing!

Re: Its alwaws rainin above me (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 07:51:46 PM AEST
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I like this one lots.
:)

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