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Array ( [sid] => 146064 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => For Him. <3 [time] => 2008-11-02 09:42:24 [hometext] => Written for a special person, who will always be in my heart. [bodytext] => Give me one more chance,
before we crash and burn.
You messed up last time,
so I guess now, it's my turn.

I didn't mean to screw it up,
I never wanted things to change.
Everything's so different now-
without you near to me,
it all seems so strange.

I don't want to push you further away than I already have,
but I need to try,
to get you to hear me.
Because all I do at night is lay there and cry.

I know it's hard for both of us,
and I'm probably only making it worse.
Now I know why people say that love is such a curse.

You want to party, and stay out to play.
Through this all I will be waiting-
for when you might come back to me.
Right now I can only dream of such a day.

So go have your fun and enjoy.
Always remember that in my heart,
you will forever by my highschool sweetheart boy.

Keep those happyy, loving thoughts
of us in your mind.
Please don't feel pressured by me,
just take your time.

I know you'll make the best choice,
for you and your soul.
All I ask, is that you not forget to let me know.

Until that time, I'll let you be,
to make your final decision
without the influence of me.

Many tears and smiles will come your way,
and laughter may fill your entire day,
but please remember my words,
and what I hope is still in your heart,
so that bit by bit,
and part by part,
we can get through this.
Together. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 22 [informant] => CloakedMystery [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

For Him. <3

Contributed by CloakedMystery on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 09:42:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Give me one more chance,
before we crash and burn.
You messed up last time,
so I guess now, it's my turn.

I didn't mean to screw it up,
I never wanted things to change.
Everything's so different now-
without you near to me,
it all seems so strange.

I don't want to push you further away than I already have,
but I need to try,
to get you to hear me.
Because all I do at night is lay there and cry.

I know it's hard for both of us,
and I'm probably only making it worse.
Now I know why people say that love is such a curse.

You want to party, and stay out to play.
Through this all I will be waiting-
for when you might come back to me.
Right now I can only dream of such a day.

So go have your fun and enjoy.
Always remember that in my heart,
you will forever by my highschool sweetheart boy.

Keep those happyy, loving thoughts
of us in your mind.
Please don't feel pressured by me,
just take your time.

I know you'll make the best choice,
for you and your soul.
All I ask, is that you not forget to let me know.

Until that time, I'll let you be,
to make your final decision
without the influence of me.

Many tears and smiles will come your way,
and laughter may fill your entire day,
but please remember my words,
and what I hope is still in your heart,
so that bit by bit,
and part by part,
we can get through this.
Together.

Copyright © CloakedMystery ... [ 2008-11-02 09:42:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: For Him. <3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 09:50:11 AM AEST
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That's a powerful write. It made me once again feel young, and made me remember that at one time I used to bleed too. Hopefully ur paths lead together, but no matter where it leads, i'm sure you will find your way.

~Bin~

Re: For Him. <3 (User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 10:30:42 AM AEST
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i can def relate to this write good work its a beautiful thing to see someone put there pure raw emotions on paper.

Re: For Him. <3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:26:42 PM AEST
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Strong emotions here. I can relate and I think that is what makes it so great.
-Butterfly

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