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Array ( [sid] => 146060 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sugar Curls [time] => 2008-11-02 01:22:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You can count the stars
and the count will be incomplete

You can count times
I've looked for you
in dreams
I've dreamed.

You can count the hours
I've marked,
my stomach knotting
etching time across my heart
since I've seen your face.

I know how many steps
to your house;
your phone number backwards;

the colors in your eyes,

how many sighs
I make
looking at your photograph.

If there in a number to infinity
then you can see me circling back;

starting again infinitely

Lower me down to deepest depths
count my fathoms there
plumb these and more
for our ocean is endlessly
deep.

How many grains in beachy sand?
I know having sifted each.

What is the size of this love for you?
There is no count of instances
for that is a number which can't be reached.

Simply put
you count with me;
together we
count twice infinitely.

Oh so sweet
are the sugar
grains
whose white dotted
fractals
swirl
in our hearts;

rotating
in Love Curls

which circle
endlessly. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 43 [informant] => lnnie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Sugar Curls

Contributed by lnnie on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 01:22:53 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



You can count the stars
and the count will be incomplete

You can count times
I've looked for you
in dreams
I've dreamed.

You can count the hours
I've marked,
my stomach knotting
etching time across my heart
since I've seen your face.

I know how many steps
to your house;
your phone number backwards;

the colors in your eyes,

how many sighs
I make
looking at your photograph.

If there in a number to infinity
then you can see me circling back;

starting again infinitely

Lower me down to deepest depths
count my fathoms there
plumb these and more
for our ocean is endlessly
deep.

How many grains in beachy sand?
I know having sifted each.

What is the size of this love for you?
There is no count of instances
for that is a number which can't be reached.

Simply put
you count with me;
together we
count twice infinitely.

Oh so sweet
are the sugar
grains
whose white dotted
fractals
swirl
in our hearts;

rotating
in Love Curls

which circle
endlessly.




Copyright © lnnie ... [ 2008-11-02 01:22:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Sugar Curls (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 01:52:12 AM AEST
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You must have been on Daytona Beach close to me-m-my Tarzan in 1985.
Hot Damn this one is magic!
Sugar Curls, fo sure.
A masterpeice of sugar curls.
smiles, wonder, joy, peace, exciting, mezmerizin,,,
emy


Re: Sugar Curls (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 02:26:18 AM AEST
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wow that was simply amazing write.
~Bin~


Re: Sugar Curls (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 07:12:51 AM AEST
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This was beautifully breathtaking...
I am so glad I saw this one!!!
Thank you for sharing your wonderful soul with us here
love smiles blessings to you and yours always
kara




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