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Array ( [sid] => 146058 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thank You [time] => 2008-11-02 00:42:22 [hometext] => I wrote this in like ten minutes, but the overall meaning is there. [bodytext] => I've been hurt so many times
Now I can't trust
Now I can't breathe
Thank You for being the reason
I can't trust my friends

Thank you for giving up on me
Thank you for saying you don't care
Thank you for never calling

You're the reason I am who I am
You hurt me so much
So many times

Thank You Mom
Thank You for teaching me I can't trust
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Thank You

Contributed by Butterflyperfect on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:42:22 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I've been hurt so many times
Now I can't trust
Now I can't breathe
Thank You for being the reason
I can't trust my friends

Thank you for giving up on me
Thank you for saying you don't care
Thank you for never calling

You're the reason I am who I am
You hurt me so much
So many times

Thank You Mom
Thank You for teaching me I can't trust
... Really Thanks!

Copyright © Butterflyperfect ... [ 2008-11-02 00:42:22]
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Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 01:07:48 AM AEST
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Your conviction is in here so well...
I applaud you, friend...
I truly do. This took a lot of strength.
It is an empowering message!
I hope you caught the essence of release from it...
hugs...
Kara....

Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by lnnie on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 01:45:43 AM AEST
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This a great step.
Keep moving
Trust yourself. You're all you need

Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 02:35:28 AM AEST
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Wwwoooooooo, scratchin my head.
ditto, dittowhat they said.
rant onn my friend,
There's healin in these awesome words.
Can't comprehend a mother doin this as my children and grand children, family, is my reason to never give up on luv.
Peace be with you and keep on travlin 'cause there's the universe to read and hold you up.
big luv,
emy

Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 07:46:11 AM AEST
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i can relate to this, good write

Re: Thank You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 11:57:32 PM AEST
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A perfect way to release. It is hard to have a heart wounded so deeply and no able to trust in complete.
I lived this. Dont lock your heart to tight hun, there will be those few whom you can trust and let in.

Light be on your shoulder
hugs
Michelle

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