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[aid] => mick
[title] => good night
[time] => 2008-10-31 21:44:03
[hometext] => no true form whatsoever put just pure emotion
[bodytext] => well as the life around me fades
c.scottmiller: and the day comes to an end and night takes over the light i look for a crutch to lean on or a feel good thought but when it comes to feelings happines cant be bought so i hide my head in the pillow like a sleeping wheeping willow i will cry myself to sleep trying to get back the things i was never ment to keep
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[topic] => 43
[informant] => outlawpoet
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good night
Contributed by
outlawpoet
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Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 09:44:03 PM in AEST
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well as the life around me fades
c.scottmiller: and the day comes to an end and night takes over the light i look for a crutch to lean on or a feel good thought but when it comes to feelings happines cant be bought so i hide my head in the pillow like a sleeping wheeping willow i will cry myself to sleep trying to get back the things i was never ment to keep
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Re: good night
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by karoody on
Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 09:57:03 PM AEST
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hugs dear friend. I hope for brighter days for you soon
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Re: good night
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by catz77 on
Saturday, 1st November 2008 @ 10:27:35 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful write.
I definately can't compete.
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Re: good night
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by Butterflyperfect on
Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:06:31 AM AEST
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You don't need a true form for this to be as wonderful as it is. I love it. I can relate, but I can't say I can write it half as well.
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