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First time in weeks
Looking at trees aflame
Red, yellow, orange
Strange feeling in my heart
We are careening down the road
As the radio sings
Our soundtrack for the day
Me and you
God only knows
It's not what we would choose to do
With-without
And who'll deny,
It's what the fighting's all about?
Into the distance
A ribbon of black
Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an earthbound misfit
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Soundtrack

Contributed by karoody on Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 03:51:06 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Out with you today
First time in weeks
Looking at trees aflame
Red, yellow, orange
Strange feeling in my heart
We are careening down the road
As the radio sings
Our soundtrack for the day
Me and you
God only knows
It's not what we would choose to do
With-without
And who'll deny,
It's what the fighting's all about?
Into the distance
A ribbon of black
Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an earthbound misfit

Copyright © karoody ... [ 2008-10-31 03:51:06]
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Re: Soundtrack (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 04:38:00 AM AEST
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Interesting.... Read it several times... Nice imagery.
I like this poem, I can relate to whats this fightin about. :o)
Anywayz great write
~Bin~

Re: Soundtrack (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 08:18:48 AM AEST
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great write different unique I liked it keep writing
and happy halloween
-kelly

Re: Soundtrack (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 09:14:41 AM AEST
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well written

Shari

Re: Soundtrack (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 08:02:53 PM AEST
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staying silent, waiting for someone to be mad at anything you say, I can`t imagine that feeling..Lane
peace my friend...

Re: Soundtrack (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflyperfect on Sunday, 2nd November 2008 @ 12:12:06 AM AEST
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I really like this. I don't think I could write anything like it. I may be new to this site, but I'm not new to the world and the trouble bestowed by it and you do a great job putting it all to words.
-Butterfly

Re: Soundtrack (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 08:15:46 AM AEST
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Wow, this is just tune freaking cool, Karabeara! ! ! ! Absolutely brilliant!!!!

The imagery is excellent.....it was as if we were the ones riding around together. Thanks for taking us along.

While I didn't recognize al the quotes I did these:

Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an earthbound misfit I could hear Pink Floyd's Learning to Fly I believe?

So if that's not imagery, is it earagery?

Loves ya,

Tim
(who is definitely an earthbound misfit)

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