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Array ( [sid] => 146017 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death Death [time] => 2008-10-30 16:28:55 [hometext] => This is a diff kind of write for me and im excited about trying this out [bodytext] => I can hear the voice of one
Crying Crying
I can not place where it is that the tears fall from the face
And melt into the ground
I know not the reason why
But I hear the voice of one
Crying Crying
Maybe off in the distance someone is
Dying Dying
I can not see but only picture one knelt besides their lovers bed
With the angel of death awaiting the last dying breath
Awaiting the last closing of the eyes
And I can hear the voice of one
Crying Crying
I can not see the pain plastered on their faces
Nor do i see the teardrops fall
I can not see the grim uncomforting look on the angels face
As he awaits those who are
Dying Dying
I can only hear the voice of one
Crying Crying [comments] => 4 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 13 [informant] => outlawpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Death Death

Contributed by outlawpoet on Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 04:28:55 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I can hear the voice of one
Crying Crying
I can not place where it is that the tears fall from the face
And melt into the ground
I know not the reason why
But I hear the voice of one
Crying Crying
Maybe off in the distance someone is
Dying Dying
I can not see but only picture one knelt besides their lovers bed
With the angel of death awaiting the last dying breath
Awaiting the last closing of the eyes
And I can hear the voice of one
Crying Crying
I can not see the pain plastered on their faces
Nor do i see the teardrops fall
I can not see the grim uncomforting look on the angels face
As he awaits those who are
Dying Dying
I can only hear the voice of one
Crying Crying

Copyright © outlawpoet ... [ 2008-10-30 16:28:55]
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Re: Death Death (User Rating: 1 )
by exiled on Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 05:23:09 PM AEST
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nice write...keem em coming

Re: Death Death (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 07:51:41 PM AEST
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You have every right to be excited. This is a good slow read.

Re: Death Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 08:18:05 PM AEST
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Trying different forms of writing can be rough, but I think you did a good job with this. Very emotional.

Well done
Larry

Re: Death Death (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 08:43:19 PM AEST
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i agree, you should be excited. it's fun to try new stuff and you have done very well with this one.
love smiles blessings
kara

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