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A puddle of water to drink from
A beetle needs a home to go to
A place where it can feel safe
I’ve seen it in your words
They paint a large forest for me
One we can get lost in
Fly among the beasts in our lives
Enjoying every breath of fresh air
Your presence has comforted this beetle
Very much so
It would like to thank you
By inviting you on a flight to the moon and back
To the depths of this planet and back
What do you say?

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A Drop of Water Between You and I

Contributed by catz77 on Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 09:38:56 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A beetle needs a leaf to rest on
A puddle of water to drink from
A beetle needs a home to go to
A place where it can feel safe
I’ve seen it in your words
They paint a large forest for me
One we can get lost in
Fly among the beasts in our lives
Enjoying every breath of fresh air
Your presence has comforted this beetle
Very much so
It would like to thank you
By inviting you on a flight to the moon and back
To the depths of this planet and back
What do you say?

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Copyright Â© catz77 ... [ 2008-10-29 21:38:56]
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Re: A Drop of Water Between You and I (User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 09:55:27 PM AEST
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i like this its a lil crazy with reference to a bettle but that makes it beautiful, not sure who its about but isnt it nice to have comfort? ha well i realy liked this one

Re: A Drop of Water Between You and I (User Rating: 1 )
by Robert_Edgar_Burns on Thursday, 30th October 2008 @ 08:16:25 PM AEST
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A Beatle needs a long and winding road for the journey
and a yellow submarine for when the dams break!!! Smiles!
Cute write. I look forward to reading more.
Blessings,
Robert Edgar "Lawdog" Burns

Re: A Drop of Water Between You and I (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Friday, 31st October 2008 @ 10:17:13 AM AEST
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A very sweet write and a creative way to express your gratitude
thank you
kara

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