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Nothing wrong?
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 03:21:37 PM in AEST
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If one would stop to listen even for a moment
they would hear the heart breaking, and falling to the earth.
If one would stop to feel they would feel the hollow empty spot
that resides like a cold stone near a heart stolen in the dark.
Nothing wrong, speak it from your lips like the lies that spin in autumn breezes.
Maybe it is your sickness that keeps you all this way.
Not caring, holding or loving, just thinking of self along your way.
Where is the angel and the light? Not walking near your sides......
Spilling hurt like dirty oil, without a way to clean it up.
Nothing wrong, speak it from your lips like the lies that spin in autumn breezes.
When you see the reflection in the mirror and smile your sly grins.
Thinking that you are above not letting another soul shine with true light.
It bothers you when the shine is a natural healthy glow/
You rather snuff out the beauty and on your way you go.
Nothing wrong, speak it from your lips like the lies that spin in autumn breezes.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-10-27 15:21:37]
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Re: Nothing wrong?
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 06:28:09 PM AEST
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A very deep write here, my friend... I hope all is well with you...
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Re: Nothing wrong?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 07:37:36 PM AEST
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Hey michelle,
Well put, but is everything ok?
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Re: Nothing wrong?
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 08:00:03 PM AEST
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Hugs my friend
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Re: Nothing wrong?
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by outlawpoet on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 08:54:20 PM AEST
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| i liked it....im not much with words so i can just say i liked it |
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Re: Nothing wrong?
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by Recyclebin on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 09:54:52 PM AEST
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Spilling hurt like dirty oil, without a way to clean it up.
Hmmmmm. I like that line. I think most can relate to this line. Some hurt never goes away. My father always told me. 'Jay, a bruise hurts at first, but after a few days it disappears, but some hurt, scars very deep, and even though in time it also heals, the scar is always there" |
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Re: Nothing wrong?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 04:45:28 AM AEST
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You tell 'em, Michelle! ! !
I am not exactly sure I completely understand this one but this is what thoughts it provoked in me. It reminds me a whole heck of a lot of the sentiments that made me write my Dear Morons poem. Its people that you seem to be writing about here... people like that, that just really censored me off!!!! That's what I get out of this one.
This line Thinking that you are above not letting another soul shine with true light. Wish I woulda thought of that. :D
Very strong write. Thank you.
Tim
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