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[aid] => mick
[title] => Fellow Poets
[time] => 2008-10-27 00:13:59
[hometext] => Many on here inspired this write. Thanks to all of you.
[bodytext] => Tonight to pass the time
I read some poems to ease the mind.
I’m amazed to see the emotions that flow,
Its art of the mind, like the hands of Mr. Van Gogh.
You’re drawn into the poet’s eyes,
And find exactly where their heart lies.
Piercing into their soul,
the thoughts of the inner take you under control.
Some pieces want to make you sing,
while others make the heart sting.
A few become special to you,
For they have touched you in their point of view.
I don’t know if you can ever describe the poet,
Sometimes they don’t even know it.
Without a sense of right or wrong,
there would be silence in every song.
They’re a very special breed,
They make you swing to the beat as you read.
Making the reader relate,
Or even a discussion in some forum debate.
But all that doesn’t matter to us at yourpoetry.dot,
We will sail with you, in that state of thought.
So my friends just keep in tune,
Inflate the dreams as if a giant balloon.
Keep taking us places we have never been,
Just like Twain did in the story of huckleberry Finn.
I end this poem, like popping a dream with a needle pin.
Thank you so much for your threads, from a poet named ~ Bin~
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[ratings] => 5
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Fellow Poets
Contributed by
Recyclebin
on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 12:13:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
Tributes
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Tonight to pass the time
I read some poems to ease the mind.
I’m amazed to see the emotions that flow,
Its art of the mind, like the hands of Mr. Van Gogh.
You’re drawn into the poet’s eyes,
And find exactly where their heart lies.
Piercing into their soul,
the thoughts of the inner take you under control.
Some pieces want to make you sing,
while others make the heart sting.
A few become special to you,
For they have touched you in their point of view.
I don’t know if you can ever describe the poet,
Sometimes they don’t even know it.
Without a sense of right or wrong,
there would be silence in every song.
They’re a very special breed,
They make you swing to the beat as you read.
Making the reader relate,
Or even a discussion in some forum debate.
But all that doesn’t matter to us at yourpoetry.dot,
We will sail with you, in that state of thought.
So my friends just keep in tune,
Inflate the dreams as if a giant balloon.
Keep taking us places we have never been,
Just like Twain did in the story of huckleberry Finn.
I end this poem, like popping a dream with a needle pin.
Thank you so much for your threads, from a poet named ~ Bin~
Copyright ©
Recyclebin
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2008-10-27 00:13:59]
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Re: Fellow Poets
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by shelby on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 12:48:21 AM AEST
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Bin,
I am happy that I am on tonight. You brought utter joy to this heart. What a beautiful and happy write.
I find inspiration in you!!
Bravooooooooooo
huge hugs from the hugs queen
Michelle |
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Re: Fellow Poets
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by karoody on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 01:56:42 AM AEST
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Bin~
Such a beautiful peice from you!
This is a wonderful tribute to the poet
and a wonderful tribute to our home here!
Thank you for taking the time to share this beauty with us!!!!
love smiles blessings
always
kara |
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Re: Fellow Poets
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 02:04:25 AM AEST
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mMm...sharing poetry to others...it's a great thing. im sure every poet/poetess around will like this. every time i read someone else's work i always get something good out of it. thanx 4 sharing this. i like the similes/allusions/metaphors u used as well. just keep the poems comin'. take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Fellow Poets
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 02:25:09 AM AEST
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I end this poem, like popping a dream with a needle pin.
Ow, man, that really hurts! ! ! ;-)
I love this poem and it had me smilin' from beginning to Bin, uh, I mean end. No really, seriously, this poem was very refreshing to read, especially since I was in bit of a bad mood when I signed in to post. Tis a great job you did here and I really enjoyed reading this.
Take care and thank you.
Tim
:-)
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Re: Fellow Poets
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 03:17:21 AM AEST
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| I must say, I am entirely unimpressed with this poem. While its premise is, I suppose, noble, the awkward attempts to make it rhyme are in need of serious editing. The lengths to which you go to make this a "poem" by making it rhyme completely undermine its flow, ability to communicate, and respect for the speaker. Lines like "...yourpoetry.dot" and "Just like Twain did in the story of huckleberry Finn" simply fail. Tributes are hard to write; nevertheless, you could easily do better. |
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Re: Fellow Poets
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 06:36:08 AM AEST
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Thank you for sharing this with us... and for the apple....:>)
This is a lovely tribute to the poets on this site.... yourself included.....
Take care..
Miss Jenni.. |
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Re: Fellow Poets
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 07:41:07 AM AEST
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| a great poem. it really gets to the bottom of what being a poet is all about. |
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Re: Fellow Poets
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 08:22:58 PM AEST
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Bin
Someone one must be high on duct tape
or crack not to enjoy this read. I enjoyed it.
Thank you for sharing.........Mike |
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Re: Fellow Poets
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by Recyclebin on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 09:23:17 PM AEST
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Duct tape thanks for your comment, I realize its not the best work...to be honest I have never thought much of my writing anyways.
But the intention of the piece was to let the other poets/poetess's know that I respect there work on this site even if its not the masterpiece in others eyes,
its all about the meaning of the poem. Like I said my intention was not to impress anyone.
Thanks ~Bin~
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Re: Fellow Poets
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by Crow on
Monday, 27th October 2008 @ 09:52:43 PM AEST
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Bin ..thank you for say your kind words to your fellow poets, they ARE! always welcome.
and if that "duck tape guy" runs out of ways to use duc tape?... I have a suggesion..for him. Crow |
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