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Array ( [sid] => 145896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Confrontaion [time] => 2008-10-25 02:22:32 [hometext] => This poem was a co-write with a friend named Kane, it's part two of three between us, the first is The Meeting........... [bodytext] => "It's cold and dark, I can barely see...."
Welcome to my world now here we be,
"A fight you wanted is a fight you will receive...."
You are weak, you can't take me,

"Your world is cold and love is lost...."
Stop with the chit chat, and step to the boss,
"The smell of death lingers in the air...."
Come on masked man no one cares,

"A fight to the death is what has been called...."
A battle of two titans, one must fall,
"It will hurt me more then it hurts you...."
Your damn right Phantom, the world will miss you,

"A place filled with so much pain...."
Shut your mouth stop playing games,
"For years now you've tried to destroy me...."
Well let's get it on so I can fulfill my destiny,

"Through the fires of hell I will walk...."
It's time to die enough with all this talk,
"To defeat you is now my mission...."
It's about time any last wishes?


Forever Faithful
The Phantom

Heart & Soul
Kane

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The Confrontaion

Contributed by The_Phantom on Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 02:22:32 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



"It's cold and dark, I can barely see...."
Welcome to my world now here we be,
"A fight you wanted is a fight you will receive...."
You are weak, you can't take me,

"Your world is cold and love is lost...."
Stop with the chit chat, and step to the boss,
"The smell of death lingers in the air...."
Come on masked man no one cares,

"A fight to the death is what has been called...."
A battle of two titans, one must fall,
"It will hurt me more then it hurts you...."
Your damn right Phantom, the world will miss you,

"A place filled with so much pain...."
Shut your mouth stop playing games,
"For years now you've tried to destroy me...."
Well let's get it on so I can fulfill my destiny,

"Through the fires of hell I will walk...."
It's time to die enough with all this talk,
"To defeat you is now my mission...."
It's about time any last wishes?


Forever Faithful
The Phantom

Heart & Soul
Kane





Copyright © The_Phantom ... [ 2008-10-25 02:22:32]
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Re: The Confrontaion (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 02:37:18 AM AEST
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Very interesting write, guys! lots of energy flowing here. Your styles work together well.
Take care
Kara


Re: The Confrontaion (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 04:50:24 PM AEST
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My Phantom and Kane,
this is energy here and the darkness in it could give me chills . I loved it...... you two write like same voice very good talent here.

hugs
Michelle


Re: The Confrontaion (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 07:27:46 PM AEST
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*Smiling here*
Awesome write, Matt..... I wouldn't like to be closeby....
So..how is my dear friend, Kane? Tell him I say to leave my friend, The Phantom alone or I will kick his butt....
Hugs
Jenni

P/S.. have to go read part one..not sure how I missed it.... I try to read all your posts...


Re: The Confrontaion (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th October 2008 @ 03:51:21 AM AEST
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Woo-hoo, the fight is on. Great follow up to The Meeting. I loved reading both of them and look forward to part three.

Thank you... very enjoyable. :D

Tim
(who sits in anticipation wondering who will win this duel of words)


Re: The Confrontaion (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 11:50:34 PM AEST
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Oh..what a nice flow ..It is a wonderful match of words between two soldier spirits, Matt & Kane, equally bright and equally energetic..
God bless love and happiness:-)venkat


Re: The Confrontaion (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 08:47:57 PM AEST
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That had a really nice "rhythm" and "mood" to it. Well done.


Re: The Confrontaion (User Rating: 1 )
by wood on Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 10:49:02 PM AEST
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I think this poem was wonderful.
it made me smile im just starting out writing
as a freshman in high school and
i think you just provided me with the inspiration i need for my next couple of works.




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