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[title] => Poems
[time] => 2008-10-24 03:48:46
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[bodytext] => I have read poems here that I think are great
And others that 'in my opinion' are not
But there's one thing I will not do
Is comment with utter rot
I don't mind seeing constructive criticism
And we all can use a little praise
When you think that we are mostly non pro
And sometimes a rhyme we cannot raise
Sometimes our rhymes they are quite forced
And sometimes they just flow freely
Our lines they may not be easy to read
As some may spell phonetically
We come from many differing lands
And cultures that to some seem strange
But remember how small this world of ours
And how broadly the internet does range
Our membership is made of both young and old
And every age between
Please let our site show the world
We can live us all harmoniously... I'm keen!
............
So now I will just say "thanks my reader"
For taking their time on this poem
And reading this that's hastily written
Tho not the best, to me it's known.
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Poems
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 03:48:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I have read poems here that I think are great
And others that 'in my opinion' are not
But there's one thing I will not do
Is comment with utter rot
I don't mind seeing constructive criticism
And we all can use a little praise
When you think that we are mostly non pro
And sometimes a rhyme we cannot raise
Sometimes our rhymes they are quite forced
And sometimes they just flow freely
Our lines they may not be easy to read
As some may spell phonetically
We come from many differing lands
And cultures that to some seem strange
But remember how small this world of ours
And how broadly the internet does range
Our membership is made of both young and old
And every age between
Please let our site show the world
We can live us all harmoniously... I'm keen!
............
So now I will just say "thanks my reader"
For taking their time on this poem
And reading this that's hastily written
Tho not the best, to me it's known.
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
... [
2008-10-24 03:48:46]
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Re: Poems
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by karoody on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 05:34:40 AM AEST
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Thank you For this well stated poem!!! I love what you have said here. Could not agree more. I hope this message is heard by many...
Smiles!
Kara |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 08:26:36 AM AEST
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Very well written and said. I could not have said it better myself.
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: Poems
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by shizzle on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 11:23:42 AM AEST
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| it means alot when someone takes the time to read something you put sometime into. good job |
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Re: Poems
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by Theshmoo on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 11:29:28 AM AEST
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| I likes! |
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Re: Poems
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 02:56:16 PM AEST
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Always great to see the Master himself posting.... Well said, my friend..and I agree with every word.
Hope all is well there with you and your tribe..
Give them all a hug for me...
(((((((hugs)))))))))
Jen
P/S.. I know you're busy..but check your PM.... |
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Re: Poems
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by Crow on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 06:06:53 PM AEST
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| I agree Mick...enough said. Lane |
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Re: Poems
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 08:49:05 PM AEST
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| hiya mick, great to see you posting, so true about our universal connection, and poetry crosses all boundaries, timelines and languages, you giving your heart and time to us at ypdc means the world to me, love n' hugs to you and yours, nessa x |
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Re: Poems
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 12:35:32 AM AEST
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Well hello there Mick,
I'm really happy to see this post.
Good work. As you know,I read lotsa poetry on here.
Many others do too.
I agree tottaly. It definently caught my attention, what you've written about here.
Every now-n-then someone just has to stir up hate-n-discontent.
Sometimes it's better not to say anything at all if you don't have something descent to say.
Hurray for our awesome web master!
Luv, huggs, blessings to you, amy, and the wild buntch,
emy |
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Re: Poems
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 01:13:28 AM AEST
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Wow it's been a while since my eyes were treated to a Mick poem, well stated and I couldn't agree more, well done old friend.
The Phantom |
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Re: Poems
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by shelby on
Saturday, 25th October 2008 @ 02:59:32 PM AEST
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The owner of the halls has spoken. Good to see you Mick. Thanks for this.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Poems
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by jcvamp on
Thursday, 27th November 2008 @ 06:04:35 PM AEST
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| My sentiments exactly. Nice work. |
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Re: Poems
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st March 2009 @ 07:06:46 PM AEST
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The master has spoken and I do agree.
thank you for the lessons learnt.
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Re: Poems
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by venkat on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 07:29:41 AM AEST
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After a long time I am reading your poem..
we all know you are a master poet having a broad vision and adorable thoughts
I like the entire poem which expresses your ideas about poems and poets on this lovely site.
God bless love and happiness.:-)venkat
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Re: Poems
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 29th April 2009 @ 03:58:38 PM AEST
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Well you have captured the essence of what this site is all about here.
Yes, we are truly a worldwide , multicultured band of wordsmiths and that's what makes it so interesting
Happy writing
Steve |
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Re: Poems
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by Mick_Puttock on
Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 05:20:45 AM AEST
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| Thanks all for your comments (This is actually a test of the comments function that I have been working on!) |
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Re: Poems
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 06:12:35 PM AEST
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very niiiice. just a positive message to those on this site,
as well as a meaningful poem in itself. great post
take care
-K.Z.
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