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Array ( [sid] => 145809 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the letter [time] => 2008-10-20 18:55:47 [hometext] => this may or may not be a good poem im not too sure so your input is apreciated [bodytext] => I found a letter just yesterday
it broke my heart into pieces
so ill tell you what that letter say
Dear John,
I have heard from friends that you been seen runnin 'round
different girls in your arms and pressed against your lips
going from town to town
well i love you baby dont you know i love you
but you just have to understand where i come from
and there are just some things you can not do
so if you want me to come back into your arms
this time cant be like the other times
this time you can cause me no harm
you can't pretend all is well when everything is wrong
you have to show me just how you feel
you can't just write it in a song
so i left you this letter to tell you that i still care
ill be on my way real soon to make my way to you
and i just hope that your still there [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 48 [informant] => rebelwcause [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

the letter

Contributed by rebelwcause on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 06:55:47 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I found a letter just yesterday
it broke my heart into pieces
so ill tell you what that letter say
Dear John,
I have heard from friends that you been seen runnin 'round
different girls in your arms and pressed against your lips
going from town to town
well i love you baby dont you know i love you
but you just have to understand where i come from
and there are just some things you can not do
so if you want me to come back into your arms
this time cant be like the other times
this time you can cause me no harm
you can't pretend all is well when everything is wrong
you have to show me just how you feel
you can't just write it in a song
so i left you this letter to tell you that i still care
ill be on my way real soon to make my way to you
and i just hope that your still there

Copyright © rebelwcause ... [ 2008-10-20 18:55:47]
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Re: the letter (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 07:07:00 PM AEST
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The importent thing here is writing what you know or feel.
Please don't doubt yourself because of one other's statement.
Good work and keep writing.
Big huggs, smiles, freedom of speach.
yeah, I'm sure I probably spelled some thing wrong but hey.

Re: the letter (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 03:15:34 AM AEST
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Firstly, emy has a great point.
But I always got something to say anyway! :-)
Since you ask for an opinion, I will offer one. I thought you expressed your emotions well here. You placed them out here eloquently. I believe that's the goal with poetry. This is my first time at reading anything from you. I will click on your name again. Does that help?
Smiles
kara

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