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Still i can't believe that we're done
A short lived love that died too fast
It seems that love can never last
I think of your lips pressed against mine
The thought sends chills down my spine
The chills are followed by sorrowful tears
The pain lingers on though it's been years
They never said love was more bitter than sweet
Or how it hurts to lose what makes you complete
Your beauty is majestic like the setting sun
So it's safe to say that i still love someone [comments] => 6 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 22 [informant] => outlawpoet [notes] => Edited for spelling by Mod_11. [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I still love someone

Contributed by outlawpoet on Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 06:36:18 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It's been so long since we were one
Still i can't believe that we're done
A short lived love that died too fast
It seems that love can never last
I think of your lips pressed against mine
The thought sends chills down my spine
The chills are followed by sorrowful tears
The pain lingers on though it's been years
They never said love was more bitter than sweet
Or how it hurts to lose what makes you complete
Your beauty is majestic like the setting sun
So it's safe to say that i still love someone

Copyright © outlawpoet ... [ 2008-10-18 18:36:18]
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Re: I still love someone (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 06:43:48 PM AEST
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Oh,
this just melted on the page, your heart singing out within your words. You may always love her you know? May your days be blessed with happiness.

Hugs
Michelle

Re: I still love someone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 06:47:50 PM AEST
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Beautiful in its sadness...
Enjoyed the flow..
Jenni

Re: I still love someone (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 02:12:20 AM AEST
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very elegantly written. i truly enjoyed this from you and look forward to your next post.
thank you
kara

Re: I still love someone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 09:58:42 AM AEST
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Good flow, easy read.
Deep with sadness and longing

Mike

Re: I still love someone (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Thursday, 23rd October 2008 @ 06:24:17 PM AEST
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this is so sad. it makes me wanna cry. i've never lost a love before; then again, now is the first time i've actually felt strongly enough for a person to say i am in love.

my favorite part of this:

"They never said love was more bitter than sweet
Or how it hurts to lose what makes you complete"

actually...scratch that. i like its entirety and am extremely flattered that you are "becoming a fan" of mine because your writing speaks well.

Re: I still love someone (User Rating: 1 )
by Mila on Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 03:27:58 AM AEST
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I realy like this one i know the feeling!

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