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Array ( [sid] => 14576 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Give Me A Title [time] => 2003-03-20 02:25:00 [hometext] => To he that gave my life purpose.

I threw this together this morning. May end up redoing it..not happy with the way it turned out..I guess it doesn't flow like I would like it to. But this is the general idea anyhow. We'll see if I end up redoing it. [bodytext] => Across a path of pleated grass
Laid down by stomping feet
Above an infinity of flowers
Dancing in a graceful ballet
Weighed down by screaming heartache
Cemented into fate
Crouched upon a mossy stoop
Sat a marbled timid statue

With thickened hands
And calloused strength
With anxiousness in heart
And bravery in mind
Sharp misery wearing on the bones
Love had been all but scrimpy
Came to rest upon the stoop
This shy and hesitant man


The tears began to plummet
The fears began to climb
The broadness of the shoulders
Met the coldness of the stone
The large brazened hands
Reached up to hardened face
And in this precious moment
It turned to you and me

Overcome with love and beauty
Distraught we are no more
Pushed forth by fate
And alive by will
There was the day
We walked the aisle
And with that golden band
You finally gave me a title [comments] => 5 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Lia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Give Me A Title

Contributed by Lia on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 02:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Across a path of pleated grass
Laid down by stomping feet
Above an infinity of flowers
Dancing in a graceful ballet
Weighed down by screaming heartache
Cemented into fate
Crouched upon a mossy stoop
Sat a marbled timid statue

With thickened hands
And calloused strength
With anxiousness in heart
And bravery in mind
Sharp misery wearing on the bones
Love had been all but scrimpy
Came to rest upon the stoop
This shy and hesitant man


The tears began to plummet
The fears began to climb
The broadness of the shoulders
Met the coldness of the stone
The large brazened hands
Reached up to hardened face
And in this precious moment
It turned to you and me

Overcome with love and beauty
Distraught we are no more
Pushed forth by fate
And alive by will
There was the day
We walked the aisle
And with that golden band
You finally gave me a title




Copyright © Lia ... [ 2003-03-20 02:25:00]
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Re: Give Me A Title (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 03:44:08 AM AEST
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this poem is truly great... reminds me of my husband and i and when we were finally married... that was exactly how i felt... i'm finding the more that i read here at YPDC, the more i have in common with those who are here as well... excellent read... blessings..


Re: Give Me A Title (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 06:19:39 AM AEST
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well written,, a beautiful story,, keep it the way it is,,a friend in words,,spooky


Re: Give Me A Title (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 03:12:23 PM AEST
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ahh...beautiful...


Re: Give Me A Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:40:15 AM AEST
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I don't think you should alter this one bit. I is beautiful the way it is!!

sleepless_siren


Re: Give Me A Title (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 10:40:20 PM AEST
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very pretty, blessings to you both and a life filled with much love and happiness:) always nessa




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