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Array ( [sid] => 145732 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Talking tunes [time] => 2008-10-16 14:20:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => So my life is kind of a mess,
But I choose to digress because for awhile now
I've been watching you,
Wondering if it's fair to choose.
Because either way, I lose.

And I could sing the blues forever,
But I can't seem to get my tunes together.
With each little step,
I lose a little breath
As we fall further and further in this meaningless endeavor.

I'm cleaning up my bruises
But I'm just a little confused
And I find it kind of amusing
That you still don't hear the music.

I find it hard to believe that you can't see,
I think I've been deceived
And I know you agree
That these lies were bound to crawl up my back and crack my spine.
I despise every line
But I keep reaching for the notes to make it work,
Forcing it from my throat,
Breathing in dirt,
And still hurting,
Knowing this is perverted.
I never thought I'd fall this far
Because I knew what you are.

I never thought I'd still be sleeping,
Hearing those monsters creeping,
Whispering lies again.

I never thought you would pretend to change
Just to watch me trip. It's strange,
To watch you feign innoncence.
I never thought I'd follow you,
Led by the untrue.
It's kind of hard to swallow.
Yet I'm still singing the blues,
Still waiting for you. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 43 [informant] => astronoe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Talking tunes

Contributed by astronoe on Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 02:20:24 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

So my life is kind of a mess,
But I choose to digress because for awhile now
I've been watching you,
Wondering if it's fair to choose.
Because either way, I lose.

And I could sing the blues forever,
But I can't seem to get my tunes together.
With each little step,
I lose a little breath
As we fall further and further in this meaningless endeavor.

I'm cleaning up my bruises
But I'm just a little confused
And I find it kind of amusing
That you still don't hear the music.

I find it hard to believe that you can't see,
I think I've been deceived
And I know you agree
That these lies were bound to crawl up my back and crack my spine.
I despise every line
But I keep reaching for the notes to make it work,
Forcing it from my throat,
Breathing in dirt,
And still hurting,
Knowing this is perverted.
I never thought I'd fall this far
Because I knew what you are.

I never thought I'd still be sleeping,
Hearing those monsters creeping,
Whispering lies again.

I never thought you would pretend to change
Just to watch me trip. It's strange,
To watch you feign innoncence.
I never thought I'd follow you,
Led by the untrue.
It's kind of hard to swallow.
Yet I'm still singing the blues,
Still waiting for you.

Copyright © astronoe ... [ 2008-10-16 14:20:24]
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Re: Talking tunes (User Rating: 1 )
by Kodes on Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 04:58:02 PM AEST
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wow, i kinda understand this, good job

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