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Array ( [sid] => 14571 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Brian--part 2 [time] => 2003-03-20 00:45:00 [hometext] => I found this in my photographs. I wrote this when I was trying to leave Brian. As some of you know, he mentally abused me. [bodytext] => Go ahead and laugh

Cause I know this is gonna hurt

I see trouble waiting behind that rock.

Trying to do the right thing

So why does have to be this hard?

I know life isn't supposed to be easy,

But there's got to be more than this

'Cause nothing is certain-

I can't even count on my love.

Why does it always end up like this?

Over and over, the same painful circle

I feel that I can never be happy

Stupid, lying to myself

Just to avoid admitting

That I made a mistake for three years

It was all a waste of time

For I knew it wasn't forever

Just couldn't let go

Wouldn't see the truth. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 48 [informant] => karoody [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Brian--part 2

Contributed by karoody on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Go ahead and laugh

Cause I know this is gonna hurt

I see trouble waiting behind that rock.

Trying to do the right thing

So why does have to be this hard?

I know life isn't supposed to be easy,

But there's got to be more than this

'Cause nothing is certain-

I can't even count on my love.

Why does it always end up like this?

Over and over, the same painful circle

I feel that I can never be happy

Stupid, lying to myself

Just to avoid admitting

That I made a mistake for three years

It was all a waste of time

For I knew it wasn't forever

Just couldn't let go

Wouldn't see the truth.

Copyright © karoody ... [ 2003-03-20 00:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Brian--part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 01:46:11 AM AEST
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"Just couldn't let go, Wouldn't see the truth." How well I know this sentiment.

"In loves chains does reason flail, seeking freedom from the pain but letting go means losing all and tears that fall like rain." - Doug Morton

Be well my friend, time heals the heart though it may leave a scar.

Re: Brian--part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 02:30:41 AM AEST
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this one i can identify with exactly... i stayed for four years, until he choked and pulled a gun on me... then i drew the line... five years later, i still feel pain, but not as much as i would if i had stayed... thank you for the reminder... my blessings, dear kara...

Re: Brian--part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 20th March 2003 @ 02:37:48 AM AEST
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This hit home too me. I know how you feel.
I was in deeper, 14 years deep until I woke up and realized that if I didn't go I would perish. A wounded heart, soul mind and or body takes years to heal but you are heading in the right direction right now. Believe me when I say. You will find love a love so true it will make you ache but it will be a good ache!! Love and peace too you!!
Michelle

Re: Brian--part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:29:33 AM AEST
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I truly believe that it can be so hard to leave when you have invested years of your life. You feel as though you have failed but it is not a failure as it takes two people to make a relationship work and if the other person is not supportive or loving, there is nothing you can do to make it so.

Learn from the past and look forward to the future.

sleepless_siren

Re: Brian--part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 01:43:37 PM AEST
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Kara, "Time wounds all heals" Just remember that. You're better off without what he put you through, no matter how hard it was to let him go.

Lindsey

Re: Brian--part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 03:22:59 AM AEST
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Your thoughts are very clear.. A good write.. so much to say.. but truth you already know. venkat

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