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Reach the Stars
Contributed by
Alphadux
on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 09:03:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'm such a fool and don't deserve
the blessing of your love;
But if I could, I'd move the earth
and reach the stars above.
Yet none of that would be enough
to show you how I feel.
For all the wealth of man compared
to you is far less real.
Copyright ©
Alphadux
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2008-10-11 21:03:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Reach the Stars
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 05:49:08 AM AEST (User
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A tightly constructed declaration with the usual overreaching of the enamoured - to the stars that is. The rest is excellent and should work its magic on the willing heart.
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Re: Reach the Stars
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 08:32:03 AM AEST (User
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A beautiful rendering of love from the heart.
What wouldn't we do? I adore the second
stanza. It is completely captivating and as
spike said, could work magic on the reader
of your choice. Damsels have sighed for less ~
~ Breezy
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