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JUS SITTIN

Contributed by emystar on Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 07:52:01 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Jus sittin on my blood washed deck
Watchin sunrise accross, Star City town.
Floyd's saw mill makes a big noise.
The hustle-n-bustle of noise around.

Jus sittin watchin, God's mornin shine.
At Zanadua, Wonda's rooster crows.
Hens want be cacklin or lay today.
Jus sittin out side, watchin luv grow.

There's a nip in the air but not long.
Sun's creepin it's way thru clouds.
October's the month of year, see?
Nippy mornin time talkin out loud.

Some folks wonder why I stay.
But such peacefull beauty is rare.
Tree's turn their faces to the sun.
What a site of nature, I declare!

Winter want talk 'bout that now.
Holidays are gettin very close
Haloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas.
Enjoying families we luv most.





Copyright © emystar ... [ 2008-10-11 19:52:01]
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Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 09:16:43 PM AEST
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Lovely 'homely' poem, Emm...
It's great to sit and just enjoy what nature has to offrer...
Hugs
Jenni


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 11:01:41 PM AEST
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i loved this one from you emy! your loving spirit really shines here..
smiles,
kara


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 01:00:45 AM AEST
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Sounds like a peaceful place, I'd love to live so peaceful, but my job won't allow it :} but I will soon enough. Well done my friend.

The Phantom


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 05:53:12 AM AEST
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Homely and genuine al'right. I could be sitt'n there too - and that's the beauty of the poem, drawing the reader right alongside.

Spike


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 08:43:59 AM AEST
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Oh Emy, I wish I were there with you now. What a GRAND site indeed!!
And your last stanza just made me long for those shorter days and long wintry
nights! (See whatcha gone and done? lol) Tomorrow is the Canadian Thanksgiving
and it has been the most glorious weekend for it thus far. I feel the next couple
months are going to be fantastic! Great post hun! You spread so much warmth
wherever you go. It is a delight to visit your page time and again. ^_^

*huge mountain hugs*

~ Breezy



Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Recyclebin on Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 11:27:44 PM AEST
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Emy this poem made me smile. Nice write!


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 02:41:58 PM AEST
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This is one of your best, i like it very much,

very folksie, earhty, and yet tainted with an

air of unassuming skillfuly crafted, literary

embelishments, simply put, there's an

obvious style change, a kinf of emystar

in a formal gown instead of blue jeans,

most enoyable my friend . . .


i'll convey your hi 2 the misses,

and thank you sincerely for your

read and comment . . .


((((emystar))))



Ben . . .


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th October 2008 @ 06:55:25 PM AEST
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I loved the imagery in this piece. Great Job!


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 01:44:54 AM AEST
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Thank you for letting us sit with you a spell. It was nice. With your nice imagery it was just like being there and I thank you for that.

Tim


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 10:44:27 PM AEST
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nice job emy,

beautiful imagery,

wiz


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by outlawpoet on Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 05:41:06 PM AEST
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sounds like you wrote about a place i always wanted to be and a place i finaly am kind of a peaceful place you can call home good write this is good stuff look foreward to reading more


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by eternalsunshine on Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 01:37:20 PM AEST
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unique style, loved it ;)


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 09:46:49 PM AEST
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Dearest Emy~
Thanks for penning this beautiful "homely"
piece of poetry. It was as if I was sittin
right next to ya girl~
Most enjoyable as always. Well done.
love n hugs,
dreamer


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 08:59:07 PM AEST
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beautifully peaceful and serene, hugs n' love nessa


Re: JUS SITTIN (User Rating: 1 )
by Adam on Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 01:08:08 AM AEST
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Laid back...lovely....peaceful...descriptive. A joy to read.




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