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[aid] => mick
[title] => JUS SITTIN
[time] => 2008-10-11 19:52:01
[hometext] => from the deck of emystar
[bodytext] => Jus sittin on my blood washed deck
Watchin sunrise accross, Star City town.
Floyd's saw mill makes a big noise.
The hustle-n-bustle of noise around.
Jus sittin watchin, God's mornin shine.
At Zanadua, Wonda's rooster crows.
Hens want be cacklin or lay today.
Jus sittin out side, watchin luv grow.
There's a nip in the air but not long.
Sun's creepin it's way thru clouds.
October's the month of year, see?
Nippy mornin time talkin out loud.
Some folks wonder why I stay.
But such peacefull beauty is rare.
Tree's turn their faces to the sun.
What a site of nature, I declare!
Winter want talk 'bout that now.
Holidays are gettin very close
Haloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas.
Enjoying families we luv most.
[comments] => 15
[counter] => 321
[topic] => 43
[informant] => emystar
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 30
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => oops
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JUS SITTIN
Contributed by
emystar
on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 07:52:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Jus sittin on my blood washed deck
Watchin sunrise accross, Star City town.
Floyd's saw mill makes a big noise.
The hustle-n-bustle of noise around.
Jus sittin watchin, God's mornin shine.
At Zanadua, Wonda's rooster crows.
Hens want be cacklin or lay today.
Jus sittin out side, watchin luv grow.
There's a nip in the air but not long.
Sun's creepin it's way thru clouds.
October's the month of year, see?
Nippy mornin time talkin out loud.
Some folks wonder why I stay.
But such peacefull beauty is rare.
Tree's turn their faces to the sun.
What a site of nature, I declare!
Winter want talk 'bout that now.
Holidays are gettin very close
Haloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas.
Enjoying families we luv most.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2008-10-11 19:52:01]
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 09:16:43 PM AEST
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Lovely 'homely' poem, Emm...
It's great to sit and just enjoy what nature has to offrer...
Hugs
Jenni
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by karoody on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 11:01:41 PM AEST
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i loved this one from you emy! your loving spirit really shines here..
smiles,
kara |
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 01:00:45 AM AEST
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Sounds like a peaceful place, I'd love to live so peaceful, but my job won't allow it :} but I will soon enough. Well done my friend.
The Phantom |
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by Spike on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 05:53:12 AM AEST
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Homely and genuine al'right. I could be sitt'n there too - and that's the beauty of the poem, drawing the reader right alongside.
Spike |
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 08:43:59 AM AEST
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Oh Emy, I wish I were there with you now. What a GRAND site indeed!!
And your last stanza just made me long for those shorter days and long wintry
nights! (See whatcha gone and done? lol) Tomorrow is the Canadian Thanksgiving
and it has been the most glorious weekend for it thus far. I feel the next couple
months are going to be fantastic! Great post hun! You spread so much warmth
wherever you go. It is a delight to visit your page time and again. ^_^
*huge mountain hugs*
~ Breezy
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by Recyclebin on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 11:27:44 PM AEST
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Emy this poem made me smile. Nice write!
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 02:41:58 PM AEST
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This is one of your best, i like it very much,
very folksie, earhty, and yet tainted with an
air of unassuming skillfuly crafted, literary
embelishments, simply put, there's an
obvious style change, a kinf of emystar
in a formal gown instead of blue jeans,
most enoyable my friend . . .
i'll convey your hi 2 the misses,
and thank you sincerely for your
read and comment . . .
((((emystar))))
Ben . . . |
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th October 2008 @ 06:55:25 PM AEST
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| I loved the imagery in this piece. Great Job! |
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 01:44:54 AM AEST
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Thank you for letting us sit with you a spell. It was nice. With your nice imagery it was just like being there and I thank you for that.
Tim |
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by wizard on
Sunday, 19th October 2008 @ 10:44:27 PM AEST
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nice job emy,
beautiful imagery,
wiz |
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by outlawpoet on
Monday, 20th October 2008 @ 05:41:06 PM AEST
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| sounds like you wrote about a place i always wanted to be and a place i finaly am kind of a peaceful place you can call home good write this is good stuff look foreward to reading more |
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by eternalsunshine on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 01:37:20 PM AEST
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| unique style, loved it ;) |
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 09:46:49 PM AEST
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Dearest Emy~
Thanks for penning this beautiful "homely"
piece of poetry. It was as if I was sittin
right next to ya girl~
Most enjoyable as always. Well done.
love n hugs,
dreamer |
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 24th October 2008 @ 08:59:07 PM AEST
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| beautifully peaceful and serene, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: JUS SITTIN
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by Adam on
Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 01:08:08 AM AEST
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| Laid back...lovely....peaceful...descriptive. A joy to read. |
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