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Array ( [sid] => 145651 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Acid Raps [time] => 2008-10-11 13:24:25 [hometext] => Inspired by a very bad acid trip. [bodytext] => its unreal, its like a *****in dream
the wickedest darkest *****in stuff i've seen
popped two hits of acid and the trip was mean
tried to find some ***** but there wasn't none
so instead i just fired off my *****in gun
walk into the streets and unload so motha flippin fun
now things are gettin crazy, losin my grip
cause im a wicked maniac on an acid trip
i'm gunnin people down then replace the clip
i see the blue and reds comin after me
but around me's not the best motha *****in place to be
shot the first piggy down the others on a knee
blew his squishy brains out and *****in set him free
but acid crazy like that ya feel it in ya toes
could be chill one minute but the next who knows
pull the d-eagle out an put a bullet in ya nose
cause thats how the killer acid trip goes [comments] => 4 [counter] => 321 [topic] => 59 [informant] => solidsnake116 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
Acid Raps

Contributed by solidsnake116 on Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 01:24:25 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



its unreal, its like a *****in dream
the wickedest darkest *****in stuff i've seen
popped two hits of acid and the trip was mean
tried to find some ***** but there wasn't none
so instead i just fired off my *****in gun
walk into the streets and unload so motha flippin fun
now things are gettin crazy, losin my grip
cause im a wicked maniac on an acid trip
i'm gunnin people down then replace the clip
i see the blue and reds comin after me
but around me's not the best motha *****in place to be
shot the first piggy down the others on a knee
blew his squishy brains out and *****in set him free
but acid crazy like that ya feel it in ya toes
could be chill one minute but the next who knows
pull the d-eagle out an put a bullet in ya nose
cause thats how the killer acid trip goes




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Re: Acid Raps (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 06:12:16 AM AEST
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Nicely done, especially for the end, as I was wondering where this one was going.

Usually when I have a bad trip, I go somewhere else come next holidays.

Spike


Re: Acid Raps (User Rating: 1 )
by lilmissy on Friday, 7th November 2008 @ 02:20:31 AM AEST
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AHH ACID :D reminds me of fat albert and summertime :) it's been a while since i've tripped man, it's been a while. this poem makes me miss it...*tear*...lol...


Re: Acid Raps (User Rating: 1 )
by amber_vonHorror on Monday, 10th November 2008 @ 05:19:44 AM AEST
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wow well written and articulated well from the mind of an acid user.

Its fun


Re: Acid Raps (User Rating: 1 )
by Cathi on Thursday, 20th November 2008 @ 12:58:39 AM AEST
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I like the maintained rhythm of this rap. You obviously have a very good ear and instinct for what words have the most impact. The combination of language and sound is brilliant and makes the imagery as surreal as the trip itself.




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