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untitiled
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 08:04:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I love with all my heart
I give of all my gifts
I hold nothing back
Causing occasional rift
Insecurities I have a few
Maybe too many to mention
But my heart is true
Love my only intention
Forgive me if a stray
Off the path into imagination
I will find my way back
I apologize for the aggravation
My intentions are always good
Never knowing would I attack
So once more sorry am I
If understanding I lack
For I feel with my soul
I put all I have into it
Once my heart is yours
Totally to my friends I commit
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2008-10-11 08:04:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: untitiled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 08:33:40 AM AEST (User
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aw Shari, this was so touching and completely beautiful. Your soul
shines brightly through this piece, emitting light on everything it
connects with. And it is a most exquisite illumination, hun.
Just beautiful ~
~ Breezy
^_^
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Re: untitiled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 11:02:10 AM AEST (User
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This is so completely true..
Really touching write, Shari..
Hugs
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Re: untitiled
(User Rating: 1 ) by karoody on
Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 04:41:50 PM AEST (User
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Shari,The love you give to us is so grand, there is no way I could feel anything other than greatful. You give to us all so graciously without any demands. I know that's the way it's supposed to be. But so few manage to offer that. You definitely put a smile on this girl's heart. That's an amazing feat right now. trust me.
Love you so much.
Huge hugs always
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Re: untitiled
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 12:47:52 AM AEST (User
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Awsome write here, you have always been in my top 10 fav poets here, another fine write.
The Phantom |
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