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Array ( [sid] => 145631 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Mother [time] => 2008-10-10 11:17:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Rant and rave and yell at me
All I hear is negativity
Support and love and care you lack
You never take what you say back
I'm sick of your attitude
Verbal abuse of this magnitude
It's unacceptable It's immoral
Every word from you ends in quarrel
Neglectful half of the time
I'm sick of the verbal slime
Everything I do is wrong to you
I'm done! I'm through!
I'm not an emotional punching bag
You make living at home such a drag
No more insulting no more pain
No more throwing my things out in the rain
I'm tired of you constantly putting me down
It's not my fault that you always frown
Stop shoving all your anger onto me
Once I'm outta here I'll finally be free
Free of your rage, free of your oppression
You don't even care that you cause my depression
I'm over emotional I'm over reacting
Not really you know, it's a mother I'm lacking
I miss you when you were my mommy
I hate you when you become my enemy
So stop with the yelling, stop with the hurt
Be a mother don't treat me like dirt
I don't need anymore of the stress
I don't know what I'm trying to say I guess
Just be my mommy not my vice
I remember a time when you were nice
I miss that person, I was proud to see
Where'd that person go? Where could she be?
I need that mom back, the one that's happy
You have no idea how much she meant to me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 23 [informant] => desolantdreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
Mother

Contributed by desolantdreamer on Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 11:17:36 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



Rant and rave and yell at me
All I hear is negativity
Support and love and care you lack
You never take what you say back
I'm sick of your attitude
Verbal abuse of this magnitude
It's unacceptable It's immoral
Every word from you ends in quarrel
Neglectful half of the time
I'm sick of the verbal slime
Everything I do is wrong to you
I'm done! I'm through!
I'm not an emotional punching bag
You make living at home such a drag
No more insulting no more pain
No more throwing my things out in the rain
I'm tired of you constantly putting me down
It's not my fault that you always frown
Stop shoving all your anger onto me
Once I'm outta here I'll finally be free
Free of your rage, free of your oppression
You don't even care that you cause my depression
I'm over emotional I'm over reacting
Not really you know, it's a mother I'm lacking
I miss you when you were my mommy
I hate you when you become my enemy
So stop with the yelling, stop with the hurt
Be a mother don't treat me like dirt
I don't need anymore of the stress
I don't know what I'm trying to say I guess
Just be my mommy not my vice
I remember a time when you were nice
I miss that person, I was proud to see
Where'd that person go? Where could she be?
I need that mom back, the one that's happy
You have no idea how much she meant to me




Copyright © desolantdreamer ... [ 2008-10-10 11:17:36]
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Re: Mother (User Rating: 1 )
by roxie on Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 03:24:56 PM AEST
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I LACK MY MOTHERS LOVE TOO AND I LOVE HER SO MUCH BUT YOU CAN'T LONG ON THAT CUZ YOU WILL FIND YOURSELF DEPRESSED YOU HAVE STAY STRONG AND BE THE ADULT SOMETIMES THE LOVE OF A DAUGHTER IS VERY STRONG BECAUSE SHE'S LIKE A GOD IN YOUR EYES. KEEP YOUR HEAD UP HIGH AND STAY STRONG
VERY GOOD WRITE!!!
ROXIE


Re: Mother (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 04:04:18 AM AEST
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I hate that you have to live like this. I am glad that you are at least doing something to get the emotions out. It's not easy when you are sitting there with your heart on the line and getting nothing but pain back. Try your best to always know that you are a beautiful soul and that you deserve better.
Huge Hugs and Love
Kara




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