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Array ( [sid] => 145627 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Dream [time] => 2008-10-10 00:30:54 [hometext] => The best dreams are made from love. [bodytext] => The dream so real,
I can almost taste it.
Just keep laying there my love.
Don’t move, just let this love emit.

My finger on your soft lips
Hush my darling, don’t say a word
Listen to our breathing, oh yes…
Our love can be heard.

Feeling the heat radiate between us,
The passion before us transpires…
Consumed by all these feelings,
Hush my darling, let go of all your desires.

Taste this kiss, savor the moment
Feels …as if you’re dying.
The love at this moment,
Is something we aren’t denying.

Holding you so close,
My warmth, on fire.
The lust between, over comes,
Hush my daring, let our sins conspire.

The friction becomes a rhythm,
Moans, our glistening bodies perspire
Hush my darling, its this romance
that we must admire.

The flavor of your womanly softness
Has my head turning.
I can feel your inside, all around me,
The fuel of lust has me burning.

The near death look in your eyes
Tells of the desire.
I cannot hold off
This moment has me on fire.

Hush my darling… catch your breath.
Hold onto this moment of bliss.
Close your eyes, savor this flavor
Sink, and fall into the abyss.

Entwined, you and I lay,
Time can go on however.
Because our love ….my darling
Will continue on forever and ever. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 2 [informant] => recyclebin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

The Dream

Contributed by recyclebin on Friday, 10th October 2008 @ 12:30:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The dream so real,
I can almost taste it.
Just keep laying there my love.
Don’t move, just let this love emit.

My finger on your soft lips
Hush my darling, don’t say a word
Listen to our breathing, oh yes…
Our love can be heard.

Feeling the heat radiate between us,
The passion before us transpires…
Consumed by all these feelings,
Hush my darling, let go of all your desires.

Taste this kiss, savor the moment
Feels …as if you’re dying.
The love at this moment,
Is something we aren’t denying.

Holding you so close,
My warmth, on fire.
The lust between, over comes,
Hush my daring, let our sins conspire.

The friction becomes a rhythm,
Moans, our glistening bodies perspire
Hush my darling, its this romance
that we must admire.

The flavor of your womanly softness
Has my head turning.
I can feel your inside, all around me,
The fuel of lust has me burning.

The near death look in your eyes
Tells of the desire.
I cannot hold off
This moment has me on fire.

Hush my darling… catch your breath.
Hold onto this moment of bliss.
Close your eyes, savor this flavor
Sink, and fall into the abyss.

Entwined, you and I lay,
Time can go on however.
Because our love ….my darling
Will continue on forever and ever.

Copyright Â© recyclebin ... [ 2008-10-10 00:30:54]
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Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Saturday, 11th October 2008 @ 06:18:21 PM AEST
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It is rare that someone can write something on this subject that I actually will read. This was beautiful and sensual. Very real.
Your love shall treasure this
Kara

Re: The Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th October 2008 @ 04:28:46 PM AEST
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Wow! This is stunningly sensual and breath takingly romantic. This should have had many more reads than it got. This was fantastic and potent! "The near death look in your eyes". Wow, I have never heard it described in that way and it goes perfectly in a poetic sense with the French and their description of the climax of such intimacy "the little death". This was fascinating. Your word choices were compelling, fantastic, and sweeping! This is fine passionate work my friend!

EXCELLENT!

SCM

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