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Array ( [sid] => 1456 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cold Decay [time] => 2002-07-30 13:44:15 [hometext] => the rubber-band snaps,
and the sting is not felt [bodytext] => Cold and black and dark
Those memories are but a slide show before my eyes,
A beginning and an end as I remember how we lived and loved,
And now my cold dead form takes the life from you.
A beginning and an end,
Every story has an end.
I feel nothing.
A wonderful magical moment.
A moment that was shared,
In these eyes before they went dead.
And now they watch you,
Squirming like a rat.
You have no place to go.
What wonderful magic now,
That is so far beyond you,
There is no escape.
Your tears are like lowing,
Of cattle before the stocks.
And this is the way the world works.
Because you deceived me,
Because you lied,
I died,
And now there is no one to protect you,
From it,
From me.
Every story has an ending.

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 13 [informant] => zer0 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Cold Decay

Contributed by zer0 on Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 01:44:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Cold and black and dark
Those memories are but a slide show before my eyes,
A beginning and an end as I remember how we lived and loved,
And now my cold dead form takes the life from you.
A beginning and an end,
Every story has an end.
I feel nothing.
A wonderful magical moment.
A moment that was shared,
In these eyes before they went dead.
And now they watch you,
Squirming like a rat.
You have no place to go.
What wonderful magic now,
That is so far beyond you,
There is no escape.
Your tears are like lowing,
Of cattle before the stocks.
And this is the way the world works.
Because you deceived me,
Because you lied,
I died,
And now there is no one to protect you,
From it,
From me.
Every story has an ending.





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Re: Cold Decay (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 02:04:04 PM AEST
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I loved this, zerO..... *wondering how my story will end*
Jenni


Re: Cold Decay (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 02:10:16 PM AEST
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Where did this come from?! It gave me cold chills. This is a really good write!
Ginsdance


Re: Cold Decay (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 10:43:16 PM AEST
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Wow, this gave me chills too
Great write Miles

Always,
Daniela


Re: Cold Decay (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 09:00:57 AM AEST
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i think i creamed myself reading this one... i love this kind of work... check my stuff out if you do too. keep writing. -jason


Re: Cold Decay (User Rating: 1 )
by orgygirl on Wednesday, 7th August 2002 @ 05:26:49 AM AEST
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There is so much truth within this. I relate. I wish I could say more but there is nothing more to say than well done.

Thank you for the comment on April Thirtieth I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Take care.


Re: Cold Decay (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 07:39:19 PM AEST
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This was different to read
I enjoyed it
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.




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