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Array ( [sid] => 145571 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My very own voice [time] => 2008-10-06 20:07:49 [hometext] => This is my first try at writing song lyrics... tell me what you guys think! [bodytext] => Were goin down in flames
But man you know its all the same
It’s isn’t easy being this way
Yeah, you know I could go all day

The size of this heart
No it don’t mean a damn thing
Were both in cardiac arrest
And the person to blame ain’t no king
I’m the way that I am
And you don’t have a choice
You gotta listen to every last word
In my very own voice

Walkin down the street hoping this will change
I saw you with her, didn’t think it was stange
I’ll spend every last moment tasting your charm
I just got one more thing to say I don’t mean you any harm

The size of this heart
No it don’t mean a damn thing
Were both in cardiac arrest
And the person to blame ain’t no king
I’m the way that I am
And you don’t have a choice
You gotta listen to every last word
In my very own voice

Everything has gone down hill
I’m standing here choking down this pill
You were never here for me
No you will never see
What you did for me that day
It touched my heart in a good way
I wont forget your face
No I wont forget your face


The size of this heart
No it don’t mean a damn thing
Were both in cardiac arrest
And the person to blame ain’t no king
I’m the way that I am
And you don’t have a choice
You gotta listen to every last word
In my very own voice
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Claudia2008 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
My very own voice

Contributed by Claudia2008 on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Were goin down in flames
But man you know its all the same
It’s isn’t easy being this way
Yeah, you know I could go all day

The size of this heart
No it don’t mean a damn thing
Were both in cardiac arrest
And the person to blame ain’t no king
I’m the way that I am
And you don’t have a choice
You gotta listen to every last word
In my very own voice

Walkin down the street hoping this will change
I saw you with her, didn’t think it was stange
I’ll spend every last moment tasting your charm
I just got one more thing to say I don’t mean you any harm

The size of this heart
No it don’t mean a damn thing
Were both in cardiac arrest
And the person to blame ain’t no king
I’m the way that I am
And you don’t have a choice
You gotta listen to every last word
In my very own voice

Everything has gone down hill
I’m standing here choking down this pill
You were never here for me
No you will never see
What you did for me that day
It touched my heart in a good way
I wont forget your face
No I wont forget your face


The size of this heart
No it don’t mean a damn thing
Were both in cardiac arrest
And the person to blame ain’t no king
I’m the way that I am
And you don’t have a choice
You gotta listen to every last word
In my very own voice




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Re: My very own voice (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:37:43 PM AEST
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I think it's fantastic.
Good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: My very own voice (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:46:29 PM AEST
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For a first try dang lady you are rocking the page off.
I like!

Michelle


Re: My very own voice (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 02:35:58 AM AEST
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i very much enjoyed these as well! impressive first song for sure...i would definitely love to hear the music with this and would love to see more of your stuff
kara


Re: My very own voice (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 07:30:16 AM AEST
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very nice honest lyrics, sounds like someone i know, youve definantly got the potential here, you write with a nice flair and honesty, adn tell a story too!!!

nice work keep it up!!!




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