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A hint of glow in the distance,
then I knew we were near.
Wishing the sun would appear
so I could see more of the views.

Never fret there is time in this day.

Asphalt and traffic, Lady liberty off in the water
the Bay and the Ocean,
people the people, I could have been taken aback
but wasn't.

Each day is a good day,
each road takes us someplace
even during times of uncertainty
yes at the moment when lost.

The roads merge together
and we blend lightly.
In with the dawn, merge on the interstates
got the load there.

New York By Dawn........

ps Reck if you read this we are in Jersey at the Petro
we been up since yesterday morning at 6!!!!!!!


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New York at dawn

Contributed by shelby on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 02:18:21 PM in AEST
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A hint of glow in the distance,
then I knew we were near.
Wishing the sun would appear
so I could see more of the views.

Never fret there is time in this day.

Asphalt and traffic, Lady liberty off in the water
the Bay and the Ocean,
people the people, I could have been taken aback
but wasn't.

Each day is a good day,
each road takes us someplace
even during times of uncertainty
yes at the moment when lost.

The roads merge together
and we blend lightly.
In with the dawn, merge on the interstates
got the load there.

New York By Dawn........

ps Reck if you read this we are in Jersey at the Petro
we been up since yesterday morning at 6!!!!!!!


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Re: New York at dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 05:54:26 PM AEST
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Welcome to my favorite part of the world...
Home.....
Careful out there...they're crazy.....
Great atmospheric write!
Steve


Re: New York at dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 08:10:50 PM AEST
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beautiful

Shari


Re: New York at dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 10:17:36 PM AEST
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wow shell, this was awesome! HEY!! You are just below me now! (you are
actually closer than Daniel to me at the moment. lol)

Beautiful pictures hun. And the write makes me long to visit NYC. I REALLY
want to go there for Christmas some year. It's always been a dream of
mine. ^_^ Beautiful words hun. Now get off here and get some sleep!! roflmao

*huge huggers*

~ Breezy



Re: New York at dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 03:30:12 AM AEST
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cool post! i loved the mood it set! love the photos too! keep it coming!
loves ya
kara


Re: New York at dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 08:12:48 AM AEST
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Hey grrlfriend..you seem to be having one heck of a time.....Good for you..Enjoy New Jersey for me... I love it there.. Can't say the same about NY tho... although this poem brought back some fond memories..
Nice write..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: New York at dawn (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 7th October 2008 @ 10:27:46 AM AEST
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this is way cool! anytime you need a rider" I`m up for it! Lane




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