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Array ( [sid] => 145551 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => lost in a mirror [time] => 2008-10-05 23:12:58 [hometext] => this is the first poem i have written its an actual experience during bad times [bodytext] => im looking at you,
your looking at me
with a blink of an eye,
i know this cant be
theres only one of us {im right]
yeah thats me.

i make the descions and choices in life,
what the hell are you doing put down that knife
you have a life,its good,its fun
if you leave what happens to your son,
he'll grow up with no dad,so sad
he doesnt deserve that only five and full of life,
so stop being mad,
so smile,cry,laugh about live life
nothings that bad it cant be sorted out.

so now as i look at you,
you look at me,i realise that this can be,
without you im not me.
i stop and laugh at this perfection,
you are me,my reflection.
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 21 [informant] => snoopington [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

lost in a mirror

Contributed by snoopington on Sunday, 5th October 2008 @ 11:12:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

im looking at you,
your looking at me
with a blink of an eye,
i know this cant be
theres only one of us {im right]
yeah thats me.

i make the descions and choices in life,
what the hell are you doing put down that knife
you have a life,its good,its fun
if you leave what happens to your son,
he'll grow up with no dad,so sad
he doesnt deserve that only five and full of life,
so stop being mad,
so smile,cry,laugh about live life
nothings that bad it cant be sorted out.

so now as i look at you,
you look at me,i realise that this can be,
without you im not me.
i stop and laugh at this perfection,
you are me,my reflection.

Copyright © snoopington ... [ 2008-10-05 23:12:58]
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Re: lost in a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 02:07:05 AM AEST
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Welcome to our global family here at ypdc.
For a first write this is incredible.
keep written.
Huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: lost in a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 04:32:30 AM AEST
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Great first write.(:
I like it, and I can't wait to hear more from you.
And like Emy said, welcome.
-T_U

Re: lost in a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 05:38:32 PM AEST
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i agree, so much depth for a first write. hope you enjoy being a part of the site
kara

Re: lost in a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th October 2008 @ 01:06:40 PM AEST
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A touching poem vrey nicely

and convincingly expressed,

beautiful flow . . .

thank you for your comment

and read . . .

Ben . . .

Re: lost in a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by kelleigh on Monday, 13th October 2008 @ 01:42:47 PM AEST
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thats really amazing matt,seriously!!!! so proud :):):):):)

Re: lost in a mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:46:00 PM AEST
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an excellent first poem, the fluidity demonstates a maturity in your poetry, which is interesting. very good.

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