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Heart out and tore it to shreds, but even then you wouldn't stop
You still had to keep beating me over, over and over again.

You tortured my mind, body and soul until you totally destroyed
Me and sent me into the depths of pure hell. Where I suffered in
Constant pain and agony with no way out. So I lay down and died
Never to waken again.

Not wanting to, detaching from everything around me to where I
Could feel the pain no more. I went beyond all I had ever known
Nothing mattered anymore, I was beyond caring.

You can torment, you can scorn, but you will never reach me again.
I have set my spirit free to soar away to freedom, never to return
Here again where you can hold me in bondage and imprison me. I
Have taken back my freedom and no one will stop me now, not ever.

I am free. That's all I did was to come here to show you how to
Free yourself and you abused, attacked, blamed, hurt and even
Killed me for offering you your freedom. The game is over, the
Truth is out.

With love and light Starchild
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The Game is Over

Contributed by Starchild7 on Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 03:22:40 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

You blamed, you judged, you condemned me. You ripped my
Heart out and tore it to shreds, but even then you wouldn't stop
You still had to keep beating me over, over and over again.

You tortured my mind, body and soul until you totally destroyed
Me and sent me into the depths of pure hell. Where I suffered in
Constant pain and agony with no way out. So I lay down and died
Never to waken again.

Not wanting to, detaching from everything around me to where I
Could feel the pain no more. I went beyond all I had ever known
Nothing mattered anymore, I was beyond caring.

You can torment, you can scorn, but you will never reach me again.
I have set my spirit free to soar away to freedom, never to return
Here again where you can hold me in bondage and imprison me. I
Have taken back my freedom and no one will stop me now, not ever.

I am free. That's all I did was to come here to show you how to
Free yourself and you abused, attacked, blamed, hurt and even
Killed me for offering you your freedom. The game is over, the
Truth is out.

With love and light Starchild

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Re: The Game is Over (User Rating: 1 )
by 66697177 on Thursday, 2nd October 2008 @ 03:19:13 AM AEST
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nicely done.

Re: The Game is Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 08:07:10 AM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem though I do hope this is just creative writing and not reality!

Re: The Game is Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Starchild7 on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 08:37:26 AM AEST
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Hello, thank you for the lovely comments. I have to admit i wrote this poem for my stepfather just before i walked out of his life forever and it was the best thing i ever did, but i just want others to know that they can come through the other side too.
With love and light Starchild

Re: The Game is Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th October 2008 @ 05:35:37 PM AEST
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Liberation comes with a high price

but you have succeeded in yours, a

magnificent declaration straight from

the heart it's self, truly convincing, a

beautiful presentation . . .

Ben . . .

Re: The Game is Over (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 16th October 2008 @ 02:16:01 AM AEST
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Wow, this one stunned me! The emotions in it were so vivid. I hated feeling that abuse with you. But I loved watching you rise like a phoenix at the end! Such a splendid release. Bravo
Love and blessings
Kara

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