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Here in the dark, in the cool blankness of my mind
Without form, without reason
Watching from the window for the light to come on

I am fearless, thinking of you
Here in the truth, in that which lies between us
Without regret, without shame
Breathing in the very thing that makes us whole

I am relentless, remembering you
Here in my memories, in the pages of my story
Without hesitation, without design
Feeling the reminder of your soul with mine

I am dauntless, praying for you
Here in the peace, in the stillness between
Without guile, without expectation
Living through the silence without you

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I AM

Contributed by Loende on Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 06:04:50 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I am breathless, waiting for you
Here in the dark, in the cool blankness of my mind
Without form, without reason
Watching from the window for the light to come on

I am fearless, thinking of you
Here in the truth, in that which lies between us
Without regret, without shame
Breathing in the very thing that makes us whole

I am relentless, remembering you
Here in my memories, in the pages of my story
Without hesitation, without design
Feeling the reminder of your soul with mine

I am dauntless, praying for you
Here in the peace, in the stillness between
Without guile, without expectation
Living through the silence without you

Copyright © Loende ... [ 2008-09-29 06:04:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I AM (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 06:35:48 AM AEST
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very powerful writing here,

nicely done,

wiz

Re: I AM (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 08:54:26 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem. Keep up the good work!

Re: I AM (User Rating: 1 )
by roseabsolute on Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 12:10:28 PM AEST
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This poem touched me, it seems to just flow
with strength and feeling. Wonderfully done.

Rose*

Re: I AM (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 08:51:07 AM AEST
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Dawn~
Wow, this is so touching dear poetess.
Your poetry is brilliant and you are one
heck of a writer. You deserve so much more
credit on your brilliant poetry than you are
receiving my friend.
I'll scream it from roof tops
"You are extremely talented. I want the whole
world to hear it!"
A remarkable write. Keep up the great work
Wishing you a mountain of strength my friend.
huge hugs,
sue m

Re: I AM (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 11:23:56 AM AEST
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And I am impressed. So many things seem to be going on with this poem. Love, loneliness, waiting, dedication, affection, hope. Whatever the interpretation by the reader, I know one thing for sure. Your creativity, your talent for flow and metaphors is flawless. Incredible writing.

Thank you,

Tim

Re: I AM (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 10:41:02 AM AEST
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excellent imagery once again. very good.

Re: I AM (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 07:01:20 PM AEST
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I love this poem. I love what you represent here. . . it sings of your heart. truly lovely. elle

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