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Array ( [sid] => 145411 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beneath the Roses [time] => 2008-09-28 05:35:29 [hometext] => Just a little poem, kind of cute. From a picture on a gift card. [bodytext] =>
In the garden
Beneath the roses
In the snow
pearly white,
A small indication
Of another's presence
sits alone,
out of sight.

Around the thorns
he must have crawled,
On the leaves
he lay his head.
With delicate movements,
and a careful eye,
He painted the roses
Red.

The rooster crows,
dawn awakes.
They see the roses,
Miss the hint
The only indication
of last nights guest
Lies beneath the roses,

A tiny foot print.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Purple_Cherry [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Beneath the Roses

Contributed by Purple_Cherry on Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 05:35:29 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

In the garden
Beneath the roses
In the snow
pearly white,
A small indication
Of another's presence
sits alone,
out of sight.

Around the thorns
he must have crawled,
On the leaves
he lay his head.
With delicate movements,
and a careful eye,
He painted the roses
Red.

The rooster crows,
dawn awakes.
They see the roses,
Miss the hint
The only indication
of last nights guest
Lies beneath the roses,

A tiny foot print.

Copyright © Purple_Cherry ... [ 2008-09-28 05:35:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Beneath the Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 05:47:33 AM AEST
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welcome to the site!

great post!

wiz

Re: Beneath the Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 02:51:22 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC,
I adore this write, it is refreshing and flows like a river.
Lovely work.

Michelle

Re: Beneath the Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 01:19:19 AM AEST
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Warm wishes and a hearty welcome!

Wow, this is amazing. That last line is brilliant and sends all sortsa
thoughts scurrying about in one's mind. It sets the imagination free!

There is a lovely inspiration in this that I want to grab with both
hands, hold on tight and never let it go! Beautifully done!!

~ Breezy

Re: Beneath the Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 02:53:05 AM AEST
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I love what imagery you have woven into this stunning work of art. I also like how you give mention to the work that inspired such a write. This is powerful, imaginative, and beautiful. A fine coveyance of a gift and a knack for poetry and flow. Beneath The Roses, lies something that should excite and romance the reader. And to me, it does this completely.

SUPERB!

SCM

Re: Beneath the Roses (User Rating: 1 )
by roseabsolute on Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 05:26:53 AM AEST
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A purely poetic piece and very beautifully
done. Extremely enjoyable.

Rose*

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