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ill build a wall
to shield the light
If you’re jealous of the stars
luminescence then
I’ll tear them from the sky
one by one
If the mirror tries to steal
your beauty I will
Shatter every one on earth
So that you will be
a true individual
Ill do all this to have you
to myself

I will find impurities in
everything to have you
be the only true beauty
I’ll bleed the red in
the sunset in order
to dim its brilliance
In my eyes you already are
i'll bruise the sky
to have you see me
for who i really am
all of this to have you love me

im tired of being alone
when the entire world has their someone
and I am weeping into my own arms.
And god has forced me to feel so much.
I feel like giving up.

ill say im sorry
but only if
i really have to.
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i would say im sorry

Contributed by fallensilence on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

If the sun is too bright
ill build a wall
to shield the light
If you’re jealous of the stars
luminescence then
I’ll tear them from the sky
one by one
If the mirror tries to steal
your beauty I will
Shatter every one on earth
So that you will be
a true individual
Ill do all this to have you
to myself

I will find impurities in
everything to have you
be the only true beauty
I’ll bleed the red in
the sunset in order
to dim its brilliance
In my eyes you already are
i'll bruise the sky
to have you see me
for who i really am
all of this to have you love me

im tired of being alone
when the entire world has their someone
and I am weeping into my own arms.
And god has forced me to feel so much.
I feel like giving up.

ill say im sorry
but only if
i really have to.

Copyright Â© fallensilence ... [ 2003-03-19 06:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: i would say im sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 08:07:18 AM AEST
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i know i must seem like a groupie commenting on all your poems but this one touched me on so many levels - i like the ranting poems too, but this was beautiful - a real cry from the heart. makes me wonder what or who its about! great imagery, keep them coming, Kate x

Re: i would say im sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by kangarose on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:40:54 PM AEST
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a truely reat write straight from your heart... don't ever be sorry for what you right for it comes from your heart and helps you along lifes path

Re: i would say im sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 06:06:52 PM AEST
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my dear, this is the firs of your work that i have seen. no need to apologize for getting your emotions out. if the writing helps, then pls write. that's how i became a writer. anyway, i really enjoyed this poem. keep it up, regardless of the subject.

Re: i would say im sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by theangelestdevil on Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 09:29:14 PM AEST
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wow!! so much emotion in this poem. i like it!!

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