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Array ( [sid] => 145341 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Its Because You Look So Damn Good In Those Tight Jeans [time] => 2008-09-23 08:05:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Permit me,
to sweep you off your feet,
profusely
Over and over
you tend to abuse me
Like two dogs in summer heat
Treat me like a stranger
Talk to me, confusingly
I am at your feet
The familiarity,
of the irony
is not lost on me

I surrender,
have your lousy defeat

So, go slowly,
Venture into the world of the unholy
Devils dare you to eat the apple of parsimony
Where all is spent, to the expense, of energy feeding love
Of love fading into memory

I tried
I did
I loved

Once,
I really do think,
common courtesy would dictate that you would have the heart to let me down gently
Like a snake, sinking its venomous teeth into the throat of its prey,
you let me die, gradually
Although, perhaps, memorably
Even favorably

Remarkably,
nothing will be further from the truth,
Logically,
you will find another,
and I will potentially improve
Learning from mistakes
I have little left to loose

Move,
Let me through

________
___
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Its Because You Look So Damn Good In Those Tight Jeans

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 08:05:52 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Permit me,
to sweep you off your feet,
profusely
Over and over
you tend to abuse me
Like two dogs in summer heat
Treat me like a stranger
Talk to me, confusingly
I am at your feet
The familiarity,
of the irony
is not lost on me

I surrender,
have your lousy defeat

So, go slowly,
Venture into the world of the unholy
Devils dare you to eat the apple of parsimony
Where all is spent, to the expense, of energy feeding love
Of love fading into memory

I tried
I did
I loved

Once,
I really do think,
common courtesy would dictate that you would have the heart to let me down gently
Like a snake, sinking its venomous teeth into the throat of its prey,
you let me die, gradually
Although, perhaps, memorably
Even favorably

Remarkably,
nothing will be further from the truth,
Logically,
you will find another,
and I will potentially improve
Learning from mistakes
I have little left to loose

Move,
Let me through

________
___

Copyright © jyssvw22 ... [ 2008-09-23 08:05:52]
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Re: Its Because You Look So Damn Good In Those Tight Jeans (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 12:57:14 PM AEST
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You really put a lot into this piece, there is much to take in on every single line. Very well done, and a well expressed piece. I felt liberated by the last line, and I'm sure it was liberating to write. Or at least to finish.

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