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Array ( [sid] => 145339 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Somnus [time] => 2008-09-23 07:34:31 [hometext] => just a little thing i came up with in class, tell me what ya think [bodytext] => They spin and twirl,
And make a whirl,
Of light and time and sound,
They are the pedals,
In dewy meadows,
Become spring the life abound,
Running through,
Feel the dew,
Come off on feet and hands,
Feel much lighter,
Fly far higher,
The breeze float off the lands,
Look at the hills,
The bees,
The spills,
A home not to be found,
Never matter,
As feet do patter,
Muddy shores below,
Of river great,
Flow and break,
To sea of blue and sway,
Frogs doth follow,
Jump from the hollow,
Look,
And laugh,
And play,
Then does sand,
Curl to meet,
Skin between the toes,
Warm and wet,
Begin to let,
A new world take a hold,
Waves and air,
Hit thus hard,
Assault then like a storm,
Feel refreshed,
Fears are less,
Darkness swept away,
Sun on face,
Through water race,
Towards endless sight ahead,
Horizon behind,
Awake to find,
Comfy in thy bed.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 14 [informant] => shinji_kusa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Somnus

Contributed by shinji_kusa on Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 07:34:31 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

They spin and twirl,
And make a whirl,
Of light and time and sound,
They are the pedals,
In dewy meadows,
Become spring the life abound,
Running through,
Feel the dew,
Come off on feet and hands,
Feel much lighter,
Fly far higher,
The breeze float off the lands,
Look at the hills,
The bees,
The spills,
A home not to be found,
Never matter,
As feet do patter,
Muddy shores below,
Of river great,
Flow and break,
To sea of blue and sway,
Frogs doth follow,
Jump from the hollow,
Look,
And laugh,
And play,
Then does sand,
Curl to meet,
Skin between the toes,
Warm and wet,
Begin to let,
A new world take a hold,
Waves and air,
Hit thus hard,
Assault then like a storm,
Feel refreshed,
Fears are less,
Darkness swept away,
Sun on face,
Through water race,
Towards endless sight ahead,
Horizon behind,
Awake to find,
Comfy in thy bed.

Copyright © shinji_kusa ... [ 2008-09-23 07:34:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Somnus (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 09:38:50 AM AEST
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what an interesting rhyme scheme. . . wa la. . . I like it. . . you create smiles. . . :) elle

Re: Somnus (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Tuesday, 23rd September 2008 @ 11:29:34 AM AEST
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I really like the flow on this..
Great imagery.....
Great emotion.....
Great Job!
Keep it up!
Steve

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