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Tears Released
Contributed by
alyyy
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Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 11:24:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I read the words
on the page
They become blurry
they are confusing
and i cannot read them
Everyone around me
has gone silent.
I hear faint whispers
of concern.
With the blink of an eye
i've lost something
i've lost many
But I vow
That this is the last one i shed
and I stop crying.
Copyright ©
alyyy
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2008-09-21 11:24:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Tears Released
(User Rating: 1 ) by Catalina on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 01:18:58 PM AEST (User
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So sad. But a heartfelt write. keep your head up. Pain heals with time. |
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Re: Tears Released
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Monday, 22nd September 2008 @ 01:31:25 AM AEST (User
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Release those tears, my friend...it helps...
Good write..
Jenni |
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