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.....And Then Ashes Fell
Contributed by
BlackRoses00
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Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 01:37:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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....And then ashes fell from blazing skies
As though tears that had been cried
And the sky began to weep forth blood
To cover over the ground with a flood
And the clergy sang and preached and prayed
That from destruction they might be saved
Yet the ashes fell and blood did flow
As the sky's hot wrath itself did grow
With the winds, the sky made known its cause
As the stones themselves cried out without pause
And man along with beast did flee
Though nothing at all the could see
And mothers died with child clutched to the breast
As the fallen ashes did come to rest.
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Re: .....And Then Ashes Fell
(User Rating: 1 ) by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 01:41:58 PM AEST (User
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This sounds like something straight out of Revelations! Good write!!!
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Re: .....And Then Ashes Fell
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 09:03:31 AM AEST (User
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i love this poem... great write... |
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Re: .....And Then Ashes Fell
(User Rating: 1 ) by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 04:12:01 PM AEST (User
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Great work |
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