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[aid] => mick
[title] => Baghdad 2006 (REDUX)
[time] => 2008-09-18 08:34:59
[hometext] => Rewritten for proper format.... Don't know if the message is stronger now, or weaker..... you decide!
[bodytext] => The sunrise anew
Peaceful Adhan sung for prayer
Gunfire fused with song
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Baghdad 2006 (REDUX)
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navydocny
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Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 08:34:59 AM in AEST
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The sunrise anew
Peaceful Adhan sung for prayer
Gunfire fused with song
Copyright ©
navydocny
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2008-09-18 08:34:59]
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Re: Baghdad 2006 (REDUX)
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 09:51:30 AM AEST
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Steve, this is much better....and the message is still as strong and clear.....
Well done!!
Jenni |
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Re: Baghdad 2006 (REDUX)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 11:27:17 AM AEST
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It leaves such a deep touch to the soul.
Well done...........Mike |
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Re: Baghdad 2006 (REDUX)
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 02:14:48 PM AEST
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still strong message...great job
Shari |
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Re: Baghdad 2006 (REDUX)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 11:14:49 PM AEST
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Wow Steve. Incredibly powerful! So few words and yet
so much is said. It's amazing how you caught peace AND
sadness in this.
Well done!
~ Breezy |
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Re: Baghdad 2006 (REDUX)
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 19th September 2008 @ 05:04:42 AM AEST
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beautiful! {much better!}
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Baghdad 2006 (REDUX)
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by karoody on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 12:49:13 PM AEST
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writing this way, it is more harsh. the image hit me harder.
in the other one, i picture that moment of dazed confusion....i hear gunfire why??? i'm in a haze....
this one...i hear guns, i know why...they hurt my peace...make sense?
love, smiles, blessings
kara
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