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through a bluury haze,
it helps me see.
through glassy eyes my heart will stare,
look through my soul,
like i was never there.
cut to the bar last orders rung
that golden bell
like angels sung.
morning after the night before
my mind wakes up
nevermore.
i tell myself in a hungover muse
never agin
my mind i lose.
but come friday nite of fun
the drunken carousel
has just begun.
so as i sit her beer in hand
remind me once
that life was grand
remind me twice of a life so true
but remind me again
of a life without you.
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Alcoholic genius

Contributed by bigbadblinkybill on Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 08:44:46 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Drunken is the best place for me,
through a bluury haze,
it helps me see.
through glassy eyes my heart will stare,
look through my soul,
like i was never there.
cut to the bar last orders rung
that golden bell
like angels sung.
morning after the night before
my mind wakes up
nevermore.
i tell myself in a hungover muse
never agin
my mind i lose.
but come friday nite of fun
the drunken carousel
has just begun.
so as i sit her beer in hand
remind me once
that life was grand
remind me twice of a life so true
but remind me again
of a life without you.

Copyright © bigbadblinkybill ... [ 2008-09-17 08:44:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Alcoholic genius (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 08:53:19 AM AEST
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very moving write. so much emotion, i was sitting there with you. i knew the song. i knew the bar and that liquid courage. but that courage is only temporary. cause you sober up and that hangover is so vicious, isn't it?
thank you for this
kara

Re: Alcoholic genius (User Rating: 1 )
by Dustin on Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 12:30:51 PM AEST
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haha, i swear im gonna quit drinking . Awesome Write!

Re: Alcoholic genius (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 02:28:02 PM AEST
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Nicely done. I loved it! Thankx 4 sharing!

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