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Abandoned by the sun that set too early
Mute voices stepped tender in his proud head
Of hurts, longing and forgotten dreams..

Will he ever find her again?
She was so perfect, made for his senses
Was he right in keeping her away?
When no one could ever wake him like she did..

She had come to him on chance’s arrow
Said she had been moving to him all the time..
Bound to a life of conventions, he couldn’t move
Holding back, when she never would have taken.

Tears for a soul that had walked to give
A quantum phase in his lone, distant life
Turning back though for a final moment
Both their senses rang of cruel losses...
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Quantum Phases

Contributed by Sasha on Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 08:39:39 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Brooding by a quiet, hollow evening
Abandoned by the sun that set too early
Mute voices stepped tender in his proud head
Of hurts, longing and forgotten dreams..

Will he ever find her again?
She was so perfect, made for his senses
Was he right in keeping her away?
When no one could ever wake him like she did..

She had come to him on chance’s arrow
Said she had been moving to him all the time..
Bound to a life of conventions, he couldn’t move
Holding back, when she never would have taken.

Tears for a soul that had walked to give
A quantum phase in his lone, distant life
Turning back though for a final moment
Both their senses rang of cruel losses...

Copyright Â© Sasha ... [ 2008-09-17 08:39:39]
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Re: Quantum Phases (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 08:45:16 AM AEST
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oh, those chances that we give up for one reason or another. those hearts we push away without knowing why. that stinking regret that eats at us...
You draw these demons well
thank you for sharing your words
kara

Re: Quantum Phases (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 25th September 2008 @ 11:10:07 AM AEST
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very nicely done,

oh, how the early setting sun so often abandons,

wiz

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