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[sid] => 145219
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Ruin
[time] => 2008-09-17 06:47:53
[hometext] => these are lyrics for a song that i have written. in the 3rd stanza, the last line, i am looking for suggestions instead of faith. if you have any please include them in comments. thanks
[bodytext] => The clouds slowly change From their beautiful purity But i am just another obscurity Waiting for the clouds to rearrange Doubt lines my disappointed face As I stare into the sky where no one looks down I look at the ground where everyone looks up They stare blankly filled with disgrace I AM RUINED Acidic tears that burn through desire Tears that taint my will and mind Tears that would make a man go blind Cry until faith I can acquire Who'll give me this impossible will With no more sky above And forever without love No one can stop this pain until Someone will fight back against opposition Someone will put pain into submission Someone to fight against our apparitions Someone to fight my painful deposition From birth I was placed ready to be judged From birth I was nothing more than a smudge Ready to be wiped away, and thrown with the defects With the lowest standards that one would expect Nothing more than what you'd anticipate Everyone thought I'd slowly dissipate From body and mind but they were mistaken Thinking that I was born forsaken I AM RUINED *whisper* I am ruined [comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Amicus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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