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Looking into my eyes
I drown myself in your gaze
The world is spinning
I thought to myself
You just make me feel so different
Feeling myself flying
In this magical gaze
We held looking at each other
Taking a glimpse into the future
Filled with love, hope and us
“Are you ok?”
Your voice brought me back to reality
“Yes, I am fine. Thank you for your help”
As I see you walking away
The moment was brief
At least it was a sweet one
I laughed at my silliness and walked on
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Brief Encounter with Love

Contributed by funnyface09 on Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 12:07:44 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Holding my hands
Looking into my eyes
I drown myself in your gaze
The world is spinning
I thought to myself
You just make me feel so different
Feeling myself flying
In this magical gaze
We held looking at each other
Taking a glimpse into the future
Filled with love, hope and us
“Are you ok?”
Your voice brought me back to reality
“Yes, I am fine. Thank you for your help”
As I see you walking away
The moment was brief
At least it was a sweet one
I laughed at my silliness and walked on




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Re: Brief Encounter with Love (User Rating: 1 )
by navydocny on Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 12:41:22 PM AEST
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Very nice....
I day-dream and have all kinds of stuff in my head so I can really relate to this...
Great job!
Steve


Re: Brief Encounter with Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 03:00:30 PM AEST
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I think everyone has these moments :), you wrote it so wonderfully


Re: Brief Encounter with Love (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Wednesday, 17th September 2008 @ 12:48:27 AM AEST
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this is amazing work of art. i love how you went away for a second, and only her voice could bring you back. that was my favorite part.


Re: Brief Encounter with Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Starchild7 on Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 01:04:23 AM AEST
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That was really beautiful, thank you.
Starchild




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