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[aid] => mick
[title] => Emergency
[time] => 2008-09-15 03:41:02
[hometext] => the ones I love
[bodytext] => To whom it may concern:
open this in case of emergency,
addressed to the ones I love.
Here is My heart
though it might not be beating.
It will always surround You,
believe in forever, it will always protect You.
Remember these hands,
a little hard when they had too.
Our time spent together,
if there was ever a doubt?
here it is once more.
I love You,
always have...
always will...
If You see some light tomorrow
and its beauty fills Your soul.
In case You have fall`in,
can`t find the strength to get up?
In case You had forgotten..open this again.
I am right there beside You.
I love You.
always have...
always will... Lane
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[ratings] => 7
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Emergency
Contributed by
crow
on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 03:41:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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To whom it may concern:
open this in case of emergency,
addressed to the ones I love.
Here is My heart
though it might not be beating.
It will always surround You,
believe in forever, it will always protect You.
Remember these hands,
a little hard when they had too.
Our time spent together,
if there was ever a doubt?
here it is once more.
I love You,
always have...
always will...
If You see some light tomorrow
and its beauty fills Your soul.
In case You have fall`in,
can`t find the strength to get up?
In case You had forgotten..open this again.
I am right there beside You.
I love You.
always have...
always will... Lane
Copyright ©
crow
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2008-09-15 03:41:02]
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Re: Emergency
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 03:55:42 AM AEST
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this is a heart touching poem.. it was very deeply written and so encouraging.. lovely!
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Emergency
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 04:03:56 AM AEST
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Awww Lane, this is so beautiful.... I love it!!
hope it wont have to be opened in years to come....
A really touching poem.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Emergency
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 06:44:34 AM AEST
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| I have read many poems. You have a gift of thought. Please keep writing. I was left with many thoughts on your poem. All of them good. You inspired and touched me. God Bless. Your poem is better then most. |
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Re: Emergency
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 09:57:16 AM AEST
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Lane,
W O W !!
This is so special!! I LOVE it! Every line, every word is so touching!
I can't even articulate how very deeply this moved me. You, my
good sir are a wonder. You do amazing things to the human heart.
Well done, my friend. A perfect write!
~ Breezy
(ps. I got the CD and the extra labels!!! :D Thank you, thank you,
THANK YOU so much!! Let's do another one!) |
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Re: Emergency
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by karoody on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 11:02:35 AM AEST
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i know this will be a treasure in the hearts of the ones you love....it made my heart feel good...thank you
kara |
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Re: Emergency
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by emystar on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 12:28:42 PM AEST
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Dear, dear Lane,
I hope you aren't planning to check out on us any time soon.
Otherwise this has Halmark written all over it.
huggs, smiles,
emy
I'll holler at cha later. |
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Re: Emergency
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 01:31:35 PM AEST
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Hey Lane~
This was a beautifully ascribed
poem, touching, inspiring and
so deeply moving. You have
always penned so eloquently
the most beautiful poetry I have
ever had the pleasure of reading.
Dear fine poet I wish to thank you
very much for sharing with us
your amazing poetry. Take care.
huge hugs,
dreamer |
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Re: Emergency
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 10:30:45 PM AEST
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you left me in tears this time my friend...this is so beautiful and heartwarming and I know how much truth it bears
Love ya friend
Shari |
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Re: Emergency
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 03:12:45 AM AEST
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Lane,
you made me almost cry with this one..You captured such emotion in this. It holds so much and for that I thank you...... I mirror Sharis thoughts.
I love you too!!
Hug n kiss
Michelle |
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Re: Emergency
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 09:59:59 AM AEST
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ohh.. this is beautifully written, it really touched somewhere deep in my heart,
hugs n' love nessa |
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