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[aid] => mick
[title] => your sick satisfaction
[time] => 2008-09-14 11:12:18
[hometext] => sigh
[bodytext] => you yell at me until i cry
watching me shake
telling me these pills aren't me
you know i don't like this
you know i don't want this
so why are you yelling
i was so happy, doing so well
doing everything i was supposed to
without even being told
but the screaming started that horrible day
that hurting surely came back
thought it was packed away so tightly
lost away forever
pandora was supposed to watch it
but it washed over me anyway
so here i am in front of you
i'm shaking now, falling down
my face is getting wet
all my demons are staring at me
laughing at me
i'm in my little dark corner
tell me, are you finally happy now?
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[ratings] => 5
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your sick satisfaction
Contributed by
karoody
on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 11:12:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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you yell at me until i cry
watching me shake
telling me these pills aren't me
you know i don't like this
you know i don't want this
so why are you yelling
i was so happy, doing so well
doing everything i was supposed to
without even being told
but the screaming started that horrible day
that hurting surely came back
thought it was packed away so tightly
lost away forever
pandora was supposed to watch it
but it washed over me anyway
so here i am in front of you
i'm shaking now, falling down
my face is getting wet
all my demons are staring at me
laughing at me
i'm in my little dark corner
tell me, are you finally happy now?
Copyright ©
karoody
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2008-09-14 11:12:18]
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Re: your sick satisfaction
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by navydocny on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 11:48:45 AM AEST
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Such pain..
Such emotion...
All of my hopes to you!
Steve |
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Re: your sick satisfaction
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 12:28:42 PM AEST
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So sad.... Hang in there, my friend..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: your sick satisfaction
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 10:17:38 AM AEST
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kara,
oh sweetie, this is heartbreaking. (I read your TIWICTY thread). I'm so
sorry you are going through this. I know first hand what it's like to watch
someone you love endure what you have (as said in that thread). My sister
suffered from the same thing and your piece has reopened some
emotion I felt during that time.
All my hopes and prayers are with you. Hopefully you will find
the support you need, because that is ultimately the best medicine
there is. Keep the chin up, girlie! =)
Thanks for sharing this -
~ Breezy
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Re: your sick satisfaction
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by Crow on
Monday, 15th September 2008 @ 12:57:35 PM AEST
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Kara, nice to meet you, I also read the thread, all good thoughts from me to you.
thanks for sharing. Lane
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Re: your sick satisfaction
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 10:21:56 AM AEST
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pandora never was the honorable one... tomorrow will be a better day, sweetie, one day at a time or a few hours or minutes at a time, you will get through this, when they do this, wash your face and sit down and take a few deep breaths, i dont think its making them happy, i think they are frustrated and making some wrong choices, not all people have the understanding and heart that you do my dear,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: your sick satisfaction
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 09:01:09 AM AEST
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OMG!!!! So full of raw emotion. I can really feel the pain in this one, Karabeara!!! If there is at least one positive thing that can come out of all that painful abuse, it's when a poet can write it out so wonderfully. You've done that with this one.
And whoever is doing this to you...tell them this isn't how you show love. That's not even tough love. That's flat out abusive.
Grrr.... that makes me mad! How in the hell can someone yell at you at a time like this?
*HUGER THAN HUGE HUG* Like one of those Karabear hugs!!!!!  [s17.photobucket.com]
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Re: your sick satisfaction
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 26th September 2008 @ 09:32:22 AM AEST
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Gosh Kara by the time I finish reading
your work I will need a whole box of tissues.
You have been through a great deal. You are
a fighter Kara and I admire you so much.
Chin up sweetheart. Tomorrows another day.
A painful and emotive write penned from the
very depths.
wishing you the very best always
love & hugs,
dreamer
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Re: your sick satisfaction
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by wizard on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 04:55:15 AM AEST
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so much sadness, i hope writing this helped..
nicely done
wiz |
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Re: your sick satisfaction
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 02:42:38 AM AEST
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The feelings in this are not just strong, they are VIVID!
You definitely have the knack for invoking feeling from the readers. well penned! |
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