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Array ( [sid] => 145132 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => shattered mirror [time] => 2008-09-13 09:22:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => a shattered mirror show the reflection,of one person,
but as we look deep into it we see a reflection of many people,
sometimes it not for us too see but we do,
no matter how hard we look into this shattered mirror,
we still see only one,,

but then we wonder,,could it be the many sides of us,,
could it be the thing that we always wanted to know,
like who are we,,why are we here,,am i this bad,,
it;s only a shattered mirror,,

no bad luck, no cuts, just your image,
of the person whom you are,
not a mistake, or misunderstood,
a person who cares,,

it's just a shattered mirror,,

craig s. meeks [comments] => 4 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 21 [informant] => spooky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

shattered mirror

Contributed by spooky on Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 09:22:39 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

a shattered mirror show the reflection,of one person,
but as we look deep into it we see a reflection of many people,
sometimes it not for us too see but we do,
no matter how hard we look into this shattered mirror,
we still see only one,,

but then we wonder,,could it be the many sides of us,,
could it be the thing that we always wanted to know,
like who are we,,why are we here,,am i this bad,,
it;s only a shattered mirror,,

no bad luck, no cuts, just your image,
of the person whom you are,
not a mistake, or misunderstood,
a person who cares,,

it's just a shattered mirror,,

craig s. meeks

Copyright © spooky ... [ 2008-09-13 09:22:39]
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Re: shattered mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 10:58:28 AM AEST
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very thought provoking. I really liked the the angle you took with
a shattered mirror. Sometimes unfortunately, that one face is
so distorted, even WE don't see the real us. For some,
even then, they are not schooled in the dangers of our darker self.

Anyway, very well written, as always. =)

~ Breezy

Re: shattered mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th September 2008 @ 03:04:08 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this,
I could imagine every line vividly,
please keep writing!

Re: shattered mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 16th September 2008 @ 01:00:06 PM AEST
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as long as im not the one who broke it, its just a shattered mirror, lol, im superstiious about them, excellent write craig, your poetry is always a joy to read:)

hugs n' love nessa

Re: shattered mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 26th September 2008 @ 11:16:35 AM AEST
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A very thought provoking write you have
here Craig. We don't always see what we
want. I like how you bring this across to your
reader. Well done. Keep up the great work.
hugs,
dreamer

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