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Array ( [sid] => 145129 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Consciousness [time] => 2008-09-13 05:04:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you awaken to a bright light
which dilates your eyes
blurring the objects within your vision,
from a reality of a single perspective
a role played fantasy land awaits you
with no truths or lies
only ideas from the insane ramblings
from an untimed consciousness
thats hazed with perfect clarity,
if you unlock the doors
to the places elsewhere
an incorrect statement will meet you
and a jester, will stand firmly before you
making jokes of the position of all,
and if you were to suffer from self denial
that man behind the door would laugh
outrageously. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 21 [informant] => HellRaiser [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Consciousness

Contributed by HellRaiser on Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 05:04:29 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

you awaken to a bright light
which dilates your eyes
blurring the objects within your vision,
from a reality of a single perspective
a role played fantasy land awaits you
with no truths or lies
only ideas from the insane ramblings
from an untimed consciousness
thats hazed with perfect clarity,
if you unlock the doors
to the places elsewhere
an incorrect statement will meet you
and a jester, will stand firmly before you
making jokes of the position of all,
and if you were to suffer from self denial
that man behind the door would laugh
outrageously.

Copyright © HellRaiser ... [ 2008-09-13 05:04:29]
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Re: Consciousness (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 05:43:36 AM AEST
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We opened our closets this morning and a man did stand behind. Laughing outrageously, but then we kicked him in his shin. He wasn't laughing after that.

As we sit in our robes at our desks we contemplate the message behind your words and find something extraordinary about the way you've expressed yourself. Clarity can sometimes be a harsh reality and can haze those things that we want to believe in.

May the hysterical mad man behind the closet door eat your underwear forcing you to go commando this weekend.

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