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Helplessly Addicted
Contributed by
Blake
on
Wednesday, 10th September 2008 @ 12:23:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Her breath, cryptic passion
From two fixated black spheres, fire light tears forge flight
Her campaign of flirtatious gestures, quite seductive
Holds confidence in false certainty
Evil little angel
Leaves all huffing, heaving, panting, expiring
Blood red halo, innocently in possession
Sin douses luminous nature
In comprehensions deserted trap, masked obscurity perches
Barbarically whispers
Cuddle the compulsion
Caress the fetish
Embrace the surrender
Cherish the enslavement
Her gaze, enticing wickedness
Eyes lurch back
Out of body ordeal
Eternally adrift
Copyright ©
Blake
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2008-09-10 12:23:23]
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Re: Helplessly Addicted
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by Evanescencefreak on
Sunday, 3rd April 2011 @ 12:53:31 PM AEST
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| I dont understand it but it still sends shivers down my spine. How do you know half of them words, I think it would be even better if I fully got the meaning. Tell me? Did you sit with a dictionary next to you when wrinting this? Because if not you MUST be an English teacher, or very keen on old fashioned literature. Still it was a very good write. |
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